So sweet. In a weird, twisted sort of way.

I love it. It is an interesting view of what his life might have been like.

Interesting.

I like it. I like what Ryou was said to have wrote for a assignment.

Like.

I like it.

That was absolutely amazing. It gave me chills.

wow. this entire thing was just insanely good, and really haunting look into ryou's psyche and life.
good job for you!

Extremely disturbing, but so well-written! I like how the format shifted between session notes and Ryou's head... it added something to it. The entire piece was chillingly real...

Beautiful. Please continue.

ooh dark, disturbing and very good

I LOVE THIS STOREY! i wonder if Bakura ever really cared about Ryou? you are really good, and i love this style that you write in. Well done!

-_- OhMyGod...This is one of the best pieces of writing i have every read, its so emotive and has been the only pieces that have actually made me cry. 0.o You are such a great writer, and portray Yami Bakura so well! *Favs*

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... Now that was deliciously dark *forgive the pun*

The first chapter itself was deliciously horrific, and then you wrote more chapters and just doubled the fun with each one.

Poor, poor Ryou.