well done.

I am here by way of the KIA site where this story is highly recommended. I certainly see why. You have shown an intriguing insight into a young Tom Riddle. I cant help but wonder whatever happened to Mary Contrary? Was she the thing that pushed him over the edge? Was she the first murder victim? Did he keep her hidden somewhere, his one weakness? Please do follow up!

Wow, this was intense! I havent read any other Tom fics but this was just amazing. You portray Tom perfectly. His possessiveness and roughness and him thinking himself weak for wanting a muggle. Strong, alluring, disturbing and well, perfectly Tom Riddle. Excellent work, not many people can pull off writing a Tom/Anyone fic and this was just fabulous! I would definitely love to see a follow up! Great job!

Really good. Well done. This is very real and true to form. Nice work.

Man... if he didn't turn out so ugly in the end, I'd be sorta attracted to Tom. LOL, just kidding.

Brilliant, really. Loved both Tom and Mary's characters and his possesiveness. It really fit with, well, what he became. Great little plot line here.

Wonderful! A very fine evocation of the place and time. I've thinking lately how outrageous it was for the wizarding world to send Tom back to the muggles during the war. He probably was already a sociopath, but it wouldn't have helped. A gripping, intriguing story!

Hey, I loved the first chapter, hope you write more soon.
Randa

i just read your story titled 'his'. i thought it was wonderful the way you portrayed tom riddle. he also seems a lot like draco malfoy. that was a great story. i love your other ones too. please write more, you're a brilliant author.

This is the best Tom Riddle fic I've ever read. Ok, so it's the only one I have read but it's still the best. The way you portrayed Tom is indescribable. I would definitly like to read a follow-up of this story. Please make one, ja ne! ^_^

Excellent story...interesting insight into Tom Riddle's former life...one of the better ones, I'd say. I do suggest you go through with the follow up, there is a ton of potential.

*wipes away small tear* so good... I demand a seuquel!! Pertty please with sugar on top? *puppy eyes*

Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very excellent! Damn, ok, not that that makes much sense, but really-it is so incredibly good-need. more. arg. Poor Mary-I think we all know what'll end up happening to her. No, but really write another one-no, wait don't. No, do. Damnit.

Ta,
Kinky Kiwi

Interesting. I have always imagined him to be possessive and you pulled it off perfectly. A compelling fic. I would love to see more of this. It is such an intriguing tale.
One line I loved was:
~She was still a muggle. She was still a weakness. But until he chose to rid himself of her, she was his.~
Unique and powerful. A different look into the life of Tom Riddle.

I just loved it. If more is to come I could gladdly welcome it.