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MollysSister 2007-05-10 ch 1,	abuseI am here by way of the KIA site where this story is highly recommended. I certainly see why. You have shown an intriguing insight into a young Tom Riddle. I cant help but wonder whatever happened to Mary Contrary? Was she the thing that pushed him over the edge? Was she the first murder victim? Did he keep her hidden somewhere, his one weakness? Please do follow up!
Kellbell930 2007-03-18 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was intense! I havent read any other Tom fics but this was just amazing. You portray Tom perfectly. His possessiveness and roughness and him thinking himself weak for wanting a muggle. Strong, alluring, disturbing and well, perfectly Tom Riddle. Excellent work, not many people can pull off writing a Tom/Anyone fic and this was just fabulous! I would definitely love to see a follow up! Great job!
ThisBurningHeart 2006-02-19 ch 1,	abuseReally good. Well done. This is very real and true to form. Nice work.
ceikuna 2005-12-01 ch 1,	abuseMan... if he didn't turn out so ugly in the end, I'd be sorta attracted to Tom. LOL, just kidding.
Porphyrophobic Grape 2005-06-10 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant, really. Loved both Tom and Mary's characters and his possesiveness. It really fit with, well, what he became. Great little plot line here.
Arsinoe de Blassenville 2005-02-03 ch 1,	abuseWonderful! A very fine evocation of the place and time. I've thinking lately how outrageous it was for the wizarding world to send Tom back to the muggles during the war. He probably was already a sociopath, but it wouldn't have helped. A gripping, intriguing story!
Randa 2005-01-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey, I loved the first chapter, hope you write more soon. Randa
quidditchgal91 2004-12-16 ch 1, anon.	abusei just read your story titled 'his'. i thought it was wonderful the way you portrayed tom riddle. he also seems a lot like draco malfoy. that was a great story. i love your other ones too. please write more, you're a brilliant author.
Goddess of Desires 2004-11-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is the best Tom Riddle fic I've ever read. Ok, so it's the only one I have read but it's still the best. The way you portrayed Tom is indescribable. I would definitly like to read a follow-up of this story. Please make one, ja ne! ^_^
KLD 2004-11-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseExcellent story...interesting insight into Tom Riddle's former life...one of the better ones, I'd say. I do suggest you go through with the follow up, there is a ton of potential.
MistressCoCoLoVeR 2004-10-21 ch 1,	abusewipes away small tear so good... I demand a seuquel!! Pertty please with sugar on top? puppy eyes
Kinky Kiwi 2004-08-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very excellent! Damn, ok, not that that makes much sense, but really-it is so incredibly good-need. more. arg. Poor Mary-I think we all know what'll end up happening to her. No, but really write another one-no, wait don't. No, do. Damnit. Ta, Kinky Kiwi
Merit Somnia 2004-07-11 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I have always imagined him to be possessive and you pulled it off perfectly. A compelling fic. I would love to see more of this. It is such an intriguing tale. One line I loved was: ~She was still a muggle. She was still a weakness. But until he chose to rid himself of her, she was his.~ Unique and powerful. A different look into the life of Tom Riddle.
lielabell 2004-06-25 ch 1,	abuseI just loved it. If more is to come I could gladdly welcome it.
dreaming_incense 2004-05-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow – I really liked this story, the idea was great. It was realistic, Tom was really believable – he didn’t once slip out of character. You sound a lot older when you write, than most of the author’s here, and you use great descriptive words too – it’s a compliment – 10 outta 10!

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