 P0rn04Pyr0s 2004-10-09 . chapter 2In reply to review on Mind Games: WHAT?! are you serious!? thats . . . kind of disturbing . . .wouldnt everyone else know though? oh well. . . atleast the Akito/toru fics might stop . . . |
 youronlydoll 2004-09-02 . chapter 1Hi, this is the author of Queen Cryoraider and the Conjuration of Falsehood. Sorry, I haven't actually read your story, it's just I couldn't get your email so I had to reply to your review here.
The reason you can't read the rest of my fic is because I've just taken it down, because of everyone saying basically what you said. I'm really beginning to think people can't read properly because in the summary it did say SLIGHTLY AU, which I do keep stressing. |
 beatrix 2004-07-10 . chapter 2 Tasuki was pretty mean in the 1st chapter, but that's ok.i wanna see what happens in the next chappie, update soon! |
 plz update! 2004-07-10 . chapter 1 plz update soon! |
 cutiepie112491 2004-06-14 . chapter 2i luv thiz fic , it'z so good! |
 Cherry-Wolf 2004-02-02 . chapter 2I think you are good at capturing character's personality! Chiriko sounds so wise and that is how he is suppose to be. This fic sounds very promising. Update soon, onegai. |
 Amaya-san 2004-01-30 . chapter 2Kewlios! Another cool chappie is done!! *claps* Why was Chiriko being so nice to her?! She don't deserve it!! Hey, just curious, but...the guy with the band around his head would be Kouji, ne? lol Just checkin' anyways^^ So...when're ya gonna bring in Chichiri-koi? lol jk I look forward to the next chapter!! Hope it's up soon! See ya!^-~
~*Amaya-san*~ |
 KittyLynne 2004-01-30 . chapter 2You deserve a plethora of kudos on developing such such an original story-as well as for your absorbing prose. ^_^
So Yui is at Mt. Reikaku? Very intriguing!! :):)If this is so, then the dark haired man must be Kouji? I also enjoyed Chiriko's appearance in this chapter. The dialogue between him and Yui really rang true for me; it seemed very in character for her to regard him as a mere child, to underestimate him...and Chiriko's manner struck exactly the right balance between ingenuousness and worldly-wise warrior. Excellent insights, there.
From a psychological pov, it struck me that Yui is in the process of being 'deprogrammed'. Tasuki has gotten her attention, Chiriko has gotten her to think...now who will be next? I can't wait to find out!
Hugs and good wishes,
KittyLynne:)
PS. I wish you a peaceful and safe trip across the Atlantic.*sends hug* |
 diabolique 2004-01-30 . chapter 1Wow! This fic looks like it's going to be great. I've always been rather fond of Yui and sympathized with her a bit. I love that Tasuki is so in character. Chiriko isn't one of my favorites (I found him to be rather a flat character all the way until his death ... and then I cried buckets.) Anyway, great job and keep those chapters coming.
As always I remain,
diabolique. |
 Amaya-san 2004-01-09 . chapter 1Kewlios! About time she atoned for her sins, right? Sorry, I don't really like Yui. One, her attitude bites. Second; what? Is she trying to defy her gender with the short hair? What's next?
OMG!! TASUKI-SAMA!! *glomp-tackles mentioned bishounen* You did such a good job with him! *huggles you* Great job!^-~
I think the beginning is great, but it would also help if there were more chappies, ne? I'll look forward to reading it/them soon, if you post by then. Sayonara!
~*Amaya-san*~ |
 aquafina rain 2003-10-25 . chapter 1Hrmm. Intense. I luff.
Yeah, sadly, that's all I have to say. ~.~' |
 KittyLynne 2003-10-25 . chapter 1Welcome back, Kaneta! Wai! *tosses orange and black confetti in honor of the season* I'm so glad you're posting again! ^_^
Wow! This story was a surprise in many ways ...it's a lot darker and harsher than I am used to seeing from you. The idea is very fresh and orginal. I question the idea that Tasuki or any of the seishi would want to hurt someone Miaka cared about, yet you gave credible reasons for them doing so. In any case, it seems that Yui is about to get a very real wake up call. I'm on pins and needles as to what is going to happen next...*bites fingernails nervously*
You did a fantastic job of evoking a dark, vengeful mood that seems much in keeping with the Halloween season. *grins and winks* I can't say that I especially like seeing Tasuki this way... but even so, it's an addicting beginning. I hope it's not going to be a torture fic...*blinks appealingly* I tend to shy from those kinds of stories because my imagination is just too vivid sometimes. (WHich is why I can never get through most Clive Barker or Stephen King novels. O_O )
Anyway, this is a great start to what promises to be a very exciting and thought provoking fic- and despite my stupid anxieties, I'll be hoping for a quick update!:D
Warmest wishes,
KittyLynne:):) |