 Lenne 2009-11-25 . chapter 17 i love the story but it makes me sick...i'm sorry i love this story it just I hate when it mostly shows Tohru and kyo going all lovely on each other and i want to puke, i like that Kagura is changing along with Yuki but man i wish i could choke that stupid Tohru...i mean how can anyone be that dumb and selfish.
Um cool story it's just Tohru and Kyo that mostly ** me off or kills the mood.
um can you please make Kagura go to America, i know it sound wierd but look at from my point of view:
Until Yuki gets over Tohru, because Kagura will think it's because of Tohru rejecting him Kagura will suffer thinking she will always be number 2 never 1 so it would be better that she goes to America and change but before she leave it would be cool if she told Yuki to change and then she would come back and when they do come back Kagura change for the better along with Yuki because if Kagura stay with Yuki now it she would stay the same. Tohru would think she made everything right and i would get sick sometime. that girl Tohru need to think everyone problem are her god she need to stop sticking her nose into everyone busy and let someone else sort it out
oops but i love the story it's just a tip plz update soon |
 BloodyPoisonKiss 2009-03-19 . chapter 17AUGH!! I"M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!! UPDATE PLEASE! =) |
 part2 2008-06-26 . chapter 17 wow! great fic! i hope this gets updated... |
 ArcticBee 2008-03-17 . chapter 17 Wow the story's great. (this is my first time reading a Yuki and Kagura centered story) Update :(.
I think that it would be interesting to read if Kyo decided to duke it out with Yuki, asking him why 'mr. perfect' is purposely trying to take away others happiness, along with other things. Yuki then'll walk away muttering to himself. Kagura... confused, might follow him and see Yuki off guard before you can really understand each other though, his mask is put back in place. But then Akito decides to go to the balcony...
Hope I wasn't too mean by suggesting some ideas ^^. |
 fluffylove151 2007-12-19 . chapter 17Love it! Please keep writing! |
 Konata-chan 2007-09-18 . chapter 10 I hate Tohru! |
 NeverGoodbyeRoxas 2007-02-21 . chapter 17I definately admire how you keep Kagura in character, yet managing to portray her fragility after a the worst kind of heartbreak. It's also refreshing to have her holding back and trying to keep strong even though she has to see Kyo and Tohru's happiness blatantly in front of her. I guess the best part is her fear of falling in love with Yuki...and how she tries her best to remain faithful to Kyo even though he loves someone else...the struggle's a compliment to her character. I hope she doesn't have to struggle too much though..she deserves happiness. |
 The Box Lord 2006-04-23 . chapter 17Uh, in a previous chapter (I don't remember which one...)you misspelled "sister." It's spelled "Onee-Chan" or San or Sama, or somethin like that ^^ And "brother" is "Onii-Chan" or San or yeah...
Great story ^^ |
 MaGiCsLiFe 2006-04-14 . chapter 1i understand if u don't lik Tohru. i lik her, but i also lik Kagura. She was nice! ^^ |
 Cloud Strife Lover 2006-03-14 . chapter 5damn right she is! |
 Cloud Strife Lover 2006-03-14 . chapter 3i love it i love it i love it! |
 Kaze Musouka 2006-02-07 . chapter 17Yay finished reading all chapters! OMG this is a lovely fic! Please update soon! I really want to see what happens next and how Kagura and Yuki's relationship goes and ends up!XD
Oh, I love the way you made Yuki and Kagura, it makes them suit!Even though I'm actually a KyouxKagura fan, your fic makes me like KaguraxYuki even more!^^ |
 Kaze Musouka 2006-02-07 . chapter 14Omg I love your fic so far! *still readins*
I so absolutely love the flash back of Kagura and Kyou with the butterfly and the wish he made! It brought tears to my eyes! It's so sweet!X3
*runs off and reads the rest of the chapters!* |
 Yume Koko 2006-01-03 . chapter 17OMG!! If you don't finish this, I WILL KILLY YA!!
...Just kidding... But it's such a great story! I'm hooked!! |
 cabujabashyabawbadingdong 2005-12-02 . chapter 17 sucks |