Very interesting idea! I honestly would never think of something like this o: Good job!

I like it, but you should make it a little longer. Gary was never afraid to hate, though, was he?

Wow. That was good. Very ... very aggressive writing ... in a very good way. . Keep it up! _

I just love these Gary angsty things...

Nice story.

Ooh, a fic about Gary! LOL I know, it's a different one. Although I found it a little ironic that it involves a newspaper.

Anyways, I noticed I didn't review this one, so I read it and now I'm reviewing :c)

(I know, I'm wicked bad at reviewing, but you deserve another review anyways)

-Char :c)

Er, Misti Waterflower? A stuffed Clefairy in a blue blouse? And Gary Junior? Gee, I always thought that Gary was doing what he was doing so he could prove Ash wasn't as good as he was. Hm... I always HAVE, ya know, favoured Gary Oak. Just wanna make sure you know this isn't a flame: PEOPLE, IF YOU DON'T HAVE THE BRAINS TO FIGURE IT OUT, THIS IS NOT A FLAME! _

Erm...I liked it...I have no other comment( I really do like your fic, its just I don't know what to say, good job on it)

Um, when and where did it say Gary's dad died?

Hey, pikaCheeka, I'm reading all of your fics while I'm in school...! _ Anyhoo, on with the review! (Oh, I rhyme!) Whoa... this was odd, i think. yes, an odd short fic. Idle thought: is this really according to canon or is thisjust something you made up? Because it seems too weird... a fireman dying to save a stuffed animal. Gawd, that is so inane! Actually, come to think about it, Misty's inane a bit too... _

This is a great story!

Nice story... but short.

This was really good. A sequel would be nice, but it was good this way too.

This better have a sequel coming soon!

Geez, that was really good! Do a sequal! Please please please!