good story

The only part I didn't like here was the wrist-breaking scene. It's just so out-of-character. Sure, Nash would've been angry, but he wouldn't physically attack someone. Verbally, yes. Physically, no. Other than that, very good ^^

*Finally*, I'm able to get back to reading this. I'm still loving it ^_^ And it's great to see Kyle and Jess!

OO. I'm likeing this more and more with each chapter. Good thing you alreadyhave all of the chapters out here for me to read. ~big grin~

~grin~ I like Portia.

O. Nice. Me like so far.

Ah, this is such a wonderful story... I highly recommend this fan fiction for anyone who is a true follower of the Lunar saga; for here you will find an extraordinarily well constructed plot line that has action, adventure, romance, and so much more! You will also discover likeable and energetic characters, creatively worked into the real chain of events as if they belonged in the world of Lunar from the very beginning! And most of all, you will be so utterly compelled by the character's inner struggles and emotions, that you will find yourself experiencing what the characters are feeling, especially due to the carefully chosen words and the beautiful phrasing found in this remarkable work. This story is truly an act of love if I have ever seen one; as such writing could only be developed by a genuine Lunar fan! Surely, it is without a doubt one of my absolute favorites! :)

Hello all who visited and tried to read my story! I'm having difficulties with FF.net... this is my first story here so I'm tryin' to figure things out. Sorry for any inconveniences. I'm hoping to have this fixed by the end of tomorrow! Thanks!

Hey Danni! I love this story, but you already know that...

Umm...ff.net has screwed up your format and it's making the story pretty unreadable. Let me know if I can help.

Take care!
--K