 xRedxWinex 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Wow! I would have never thought of a mac/ginger fic, but this is really good. im pretty open to parings of all kinds, but im pretty sure that this is one of the best ones. macs my faveorite character tho. And congrats on doing the superior job on Macs accent. I'm American, so I am NOT an expert on recognizing the different accents, but in the other fics w/ mac ive read her dialogue sounded more like country hick-talk. and i know all to well what THAT sounds like. once again- GREAT JOB.
-Emma |
 Sugkuk 2008-02-25 . chapter 1omg it was beautiful! I KNEW MAC WAS LESBIAN!
but Ginger...O.O... |
 TheSummoningDark 2007-10-17 . chapter 1I don't know what dictionary you're using, but I wouldn't trust it if I were you. I'm Scottish born and bred and I'd swear blind you're making some of these words up... It's not your fault though. Even in the movie, Mac's accent made me cringe.
Apart from that, Excellent fic. The world needs more Mac/Ginger slash ^^
Peace out
~TSD |
 The Sylver Lining 2007-06-09 . chapter 1This was lovely.
I hadn't seen Chicken Run for years, and just caught it on tonight a few hours ago and liked it so much better than I did before; maybe I was just in the wrong mood the first time, I don't know, and I definitely didn't catch any Ginger/Mac before, but this time around it was like. I CAN'T be the only person who thought that, and clearly I wasn't! ^_^
Really, really well-written; convincing first-person with established characters is HARD, and I believe you stayed in character very well - and the drabbling of Scottish slang (all authentic, and very fitting, nothing seemed random and just thrown in for the hell of it; it fit her speech patterns nicely) was just lovely.
I loved the way you tied in the movie quotes, especially the wind 'er up/layt 'er go bit: double-meanings make me very, very happy. |
 Jilin 2005-10-02 . chapter 1 Kyaah! I love this 'fic. It's so touching, AND I love this movie. There's a certain poignance about this little story... |
 northernlight33 2005-05-22 . chapter 1 Wonderful story Ol'girl,I love the way you described Mac's P.O.V and I'm very interested in going to that Mac/Ginger website,you forgot to add the website though but don't worry,just tell me what's the name of the website by E-mailing me at argenta33@ and I'll meet you there. |
 K.Hall 2005-03-05 . chapter 1 I liked it. It was a bit weird to see it from mac's perspective. Although I was a bit puzzled by the scottish words up until the end. Howecer you forgot to add the site |
 Elbereth 2004-11-04 . chapter 1 I just stumbled across Chicken Run fic...and your fic leapt out at me and I had to read it. It was wonderful! I love the pairing and your style. I hope you post the other fic soon as I can't wait to read it. |
 live4lafs 2003-12-11 . chapter 1 are u goin to put up the other story u said u had? id like to read it |
 British Child 2003-11-24 . chapter 1Interesting. *smile* I'm not really a fan of Mac/Ginger but you seemed to make this work really well. I'd like to read your other story...it's good as it doesn't go into things too OOT.
Oh, love the accent! I must have read your story for the language dozens of times and I must say that Scottish is beautiful! I wish I understood most of it in a way, I'm worried about writing Mac in my own CR fic as I'm not an expert with her voice. I hate the whole 'Gingah' thing too. So wrong indeed.
I'm sorry I didn't review this earlier, I check back now and see how long ago that you posted this, and I'm sorry. *smile* I love your style of writing in your fics and I like your touch with Tulio/Miguel, though I'm not a huge fan of that pairing either. I do happen to like Chel. But yet, I like your stories.
How do you do this to me? lol
My own story is dragging on a little but I have the plot written out and everything, most of it should be done once my attention focuses on writing the next chapter. I've just completed college studies (thank goodness) and I have a lot of free time on my shoulders, so I should get a move on with it.
Great story! Waiting for more! |
 live4lafs 2003-11-03 . chapter 1k, i don't know about slash, but i think this was so well written! u should post the other story u said u had about mac/ginger. i'd like to read it keep up the great work!lets see the other story! |
 teddy_bear 2003-11-02 . chapter 1 ok...i don't like slash at all, but i'll review this anyway. i don't like the whole ginger'mac thing. but the writing was amazing. you got all of mac's emotions very well. mabye you should write one about rocky's reaction to everything mac is telling him. but i hope you write more stories, but not to much slash |
 smeagolish_smeagol55 2003-11-01 . chapter 1 okay, now that I've fully read the story I can make a better review. It's a nice story, but I can honestly say I only really started enjoying it when Mac was going on about all the things Ginger liked and how to make her happy. Like I said before, I'm not a homophobic but I feel this story could've been done with Mac just reffering to losing Ginger as a best friend, not as a lover. Sorry, but that just how I feel. I loved the end, especially, and it proved that Mac still cares about Ginger's well beging. I would have also liked to see Rocky's reaction, but I guess if your just putting it in 'that style of writing' it wasn't nessicary. |
 smeagolish_smeagol55 2003-10-31 . chapter 1 NO! NO, JUST NO, JUST WRONG! NOT GONNA HAPPEN!
Okay, I'm not a homophobic but I hate it when people say thzt Mac and Ginger were together! Not gonna happen. Umm.. I don't thinkl I should say any more. |
 silverswan1487 2003-10-27 . chapter 1 Okay, I do not know if the original response to my first review went up so..um. I was referring to another story that was deleted a while ago. My apologies. |