Good Chapter! Hope to read more soon.

that is good! i liked harry... that was really funny w/ the chess pieces!

Oh wow! This is really funny! I wouldn't have guessed English was a second language. You write better than a lot of people who are originally acquainted with English. This is really clever. I wonder why Harry had looked at crokshanks weird and wanted to see Hermione. Maybe I mistakingly skipped over it or soemthing (if I did I feel terribly stupid now. *blush*) or maybe your waiting until next chapter. That's exactly why I can't wait until next chappie! Please update quickly! This is funny! If you like Lord of the Rings you should check out my story on it under Marpessa. It's really... funny. Thanks so much for reading this rambling review. I LOVE the story! Please keep going!
Marpessa (Lindsay)

Hey gurl it's chels! I finally decided to check on ur stories for once! lol I'm j/k! anyway..this was funny! hehe..i liked it when Harry was acting like the chess peices were action figures!*wipes tears of mirth out of her eyes* hehe any way my ff is up if u wanna Read and review it!PLZ!Theres even a part that I haven't put on My Hogwarts too!

Hmm, they seem a bit...OOC. Like Harry acting childish, usually it would seem Ron would (in J.K.'s books he is and Harry is usually the serious one) But it's a nice start. Wonder what happened to Hermione...

Great story! I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT! Don't think im mad the thing is i only get through the day to come and read fanfics... yes im addicted! Well anyways i love it and, for your sake, i hope you update soon!

ROFLOL! jeez wolfie, you're great at humor... me jealous... mew mew mew... just 2 things:

wouldnt "that great Harry Potter" be 'that the great HP'?

"“Hermione.” he said quietly" "Hermione," he said quietly. Comma, comma! _

anyway wh00t! funnyness... yeah you stick to humor, and post the story that you were writing on the msg board! you really should!

now i can bug you to update this *evil laughter*