 Hocapontas 2009-08-20 . chapter 13I'm glad those two are together but I can't help but wonder how long it will be until Sirius says something stupid again. And what's going to happen when the full moon rolls around? Waiting and hoping for the next chapter! |
 (C)Kourtney Weasley 2009-03-19 . chapter 13 WRITE MORE!
i love it
Xx(C)Kourtney WeasleyxX |
 PinkSlytherin 2009-02-11 . chapter 13i hope he doesnt mess up... |
 HermioneGranger474 2008-12-19 . chapter 13that was the best fanfictione i have Ever read!
(which is a lot)
i wish you could have done more chapters or another series?
think about it
good luck!! |
 JustWriter2 2008-12-03 . chapter 1Oh darn. She gave it away at the beginning! Her child will be disappointed that there was hardly any suspense about who their father was.
-jw`chan |
 FlowerGirl95 2008-11-15 . chapter 13Update update update UPDATE! please :D tehe |
 bch1993 2008-07-15 . chapter 13AW That was cute. If you don't already have one, I'll be your beta. |
 anonymous 2008-07-12 . chapter 13 hey
could you pretty please finish this fic? its been one of my faves for ages and it would be great if you finished it
xo |
 Naturally A Marauder 2007-05-01 . chapter 13WoW! Awesome and what is malfoy going to do o! I CAN'T WAIT |
 ThePranksterQueens 2006-07-26 . chapter 13yay!! that was cute! update soon, this is great! |
 Colors Of The Dawn 2006-06-22 . chapter 13Wow. Swet. Keep going, please? |
 Adonica 2006-04-24 . chapter 13 THIS STORY IS GOOD, GREAT, AWESOME, INCREDIBLE, FANTASTIC, WONDERFUL, SPECTACULAR, FANTABULOUS,AND SO MUCH MORE!! I can't wait to see how things are going to turn out! PLEASE PLEASE PLEZE UPDATE SON! |
 mmmseverus 2006-01-11 . chapter 13i love this story...have you abandoned it? |
 Tantan 2005-10-20 . chapter 13woah, u havent updated in ages! PLEASE keep writing, i luv this story! :D |
 FreeDaChickens 2005-10-09 . chapter 13 This is a great story, good grammar (with a slightly over-used plot), but you haven't updated in over a year!
After I read this chapter, I went back and read the author's note (yeah, I read the author's note after the chapter, strange habit, I know) and it said that you like writing the stories . . . but you would never leave a story hanging! It sorta looks like it's hanging to me . . .
Anyways, this is definetely a Mary-Sue, a well-written Mary-Sue, but a Mary-Sue all the same. With Hermione changing over the summer and becoming gorgeous . . . Try making Hermione a little less perfect. Anyway good story, and try to update. |