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Hocapontas
2009-08-20 . chapter 13
I'm glad those two are together but I can't help but wonder how long it will be until Sirius says something stupid again. And what's going to happen when the full moon rolls around? Waiting and hoping for the next chapter!
(C)Kourtney Weasley
2009-03-19 . chapter 13
WRITE MORE!

i love it




Xx(C)Kourtney WeasleyxX
PinkSlytherin
2009-02-11 . chapter 13
i hope he doesnt mess up...
HermioneGranger474
2008-12-19 . chapter 13
that was the best fanfictione i have Ever read!
(which is a lot)
i wish you could have done more chapters or another series?
think about it
good luck!!
JustWriter2
2008-12-03 . chapter 1
Oh darn. She gave it away at the beginning! Her child will be disappointed that there was hardly any suspense about who their father was.


-jw`chan
FlowerGirl95
2008-11-15 . chapter 13
Update update update UPDATE! please :D tehe
bch1993
2008-07-15 . chapter 13
AW That was cute. If you don't already have one, I'll be your beta.
anonymous
2008-07-12 . chapter 13
hey
could you pretty please finish this fic? its been one of my faves for ages and it would be great if you finished it
xo
Naturally A Marauder
2007-05-01 . chapter 13
WoW! Awesome and what is malfoy going to do o! I CAN'T WAIT
ThePranksterQueens
2006-07-26 . chapter 13
yay!! that was cute! update soon, this is great!
Colors Of The Dawn
2006-06-22 . chapter 13
Wow. Swet. Keep going, please?
Adonica
2006-04-24 . chapter 13
THIS STORY IS GOOD, GREAT, AWESOME, INCREDIBLE, FANTASTIC, WONDERFUL, SPECTACULAR, FANTABULOUS,AND SO MUCH MORE!! I can't wait to see how things are going to turn out! PLEASE PLEASE PLEZE UPDATE SON!
mmmseverus
2006-01-11 . chapter 13
i love this story...have you abandoned it?
Tantan
2005-10-20 . chapter 13
woah, u havent updated in ages! PLEASE keep writing, i luv this story! :D
FreeDaChickens
2005-10-09 . chapter 13
This is a great story, good grammar (with a slightly over-used plot), but you haven't updated in over a year!

After I read this chapter, I went back and read the author's note (yeah, I read the author's note after the chapter, strange habit, I know) and it said that you like writing the stories . . . but you would never leave a story hanging! It sorta looks like it's hanging to me . . .

Anyways, this is definetely a Mary-Sue, a well-written Mary-Sue, but a Mary-Sue all the same. With Hermione changing over the summer and becoming gorgeous . . . Try making Hermione a little less perfect. Anyway good story, and try to update.
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