Wow, man! kind of a story!! Still I can't imagine Caine running a dojo with his own office and a telephone! The plot is great. But couldn't you add a chapter, where Peter and Caine are saying goodbye to each other ? 'Course , it's maybe not what the story is really focused on. Yet two sentences are not exactly much considering what Caine said earlier. I think it was something like he would like it if Peter would regard hugs ( in public ) as something normal. He also seemed pretty upset about Pete's irregular calls. And after all this all he has to say is "It's okay" ?
Nonetheless , just amazing!

Hey!! Great story so far, I love it! The whole Sentinel thing is kinda new to me, but I think I get the basic idea of it. Usually I don't like crossovers or anything, but this is really good. Please continue. I'll be waiting for the next part! Happy writing! ^-^

Okay, I just now find this story, and it's not finished?! :-) I was really sucked in, and hitting an ending was not good! Seriously, this is great. I'd just about given up looking for really *good* KFTLC fan fic, but I'm glad I checked tonight, on a whim. I'm really enjoying this story and am anxiously looking forward to reading more. I hope you update often!

You must update! This is great! I cannot wait. :)

Wow, the terrific story-line continues! I really enjoy this story... I do wonder, however, how the closenss that will obviously develop between Naomi and Peter will effect Caine. Dont answer that, I was just letting you know where my mind was wandering! Seriously, you've got a story with great potential, and I am enjoying it enormously... So keep up the good work, and kudos to you for coming up with such an original idea.

So short and far in between!
The concept is still interesting, but somehow the plot of the chapter was not as interesting. Nothing moved that much, even though I liked the boys' conversations.

Way cool, I just found this story, and I already love it! I thought the Peter/QC interaction fits with the series really well. I don't know anything about the Sentinal series... I know, I know, I probably really missed something there, but I seem to "get it" without having to have seen the series. You have done a great job of explaining enough of both series so that someone who is not familiar with either one would still know what was happening. Everything makes perfect sense. I will look forward to your updates.

I'm so glad you updated! I really liked the Peter/Elisson interaction, and I can't wait for more!

You really should update this fic. It is great! Keep up the good work!

This is really good! A very original and creative prospect, I hope you write more soon!

I really enjoy this story. I hope you intend to add more chapters soon. You've got a unique approach and I'd like to see where you are going with it.

This sounds promising. I hope to see some more chapters soon.