This is very interesting. I'm looking foward to your future updates.

Oh, and squarefan00? I advise you to never review again. If you don't like this story, keep your opnion to yourself, or if you want to blast the author, use constructive criticism.

this was complete crap and i advise you never to write any thing agian.

Oh, I like it! Really, especially the end. I'm sure Ashley will learn, with Syd as a teacher. ^^ Go, Sydney! *g* Okay, sorry, too much energy today. ^^
Need to finish the game! (Start operation: "kill another stupid dargon on the way")

This sounds...
Interesting.
I hope you continue.