This is a really amazing story! I love the suspense at the end of this chapter! Is Snape really conning the order or is it just Draco that is being conned?I can't wait to see where your going with this. Keep up the good work and update soon!
~Goddesgaia

this story is brilliant! Update soon.
I really want to know what on earth went on with Arabela, Harry and Draco over those two days. How long are we going to have to wait until we find out?

yikes! I think I'm going to cry.

Wow! I don't think I've ever read a scene between the death eaters that was so good. You really manage to show the different sides of the Harry Potter universe that we don't often see in the books.

Rain is such a brilliant character! I've been waiting ages for a good fic where someone reached out to the slytherins and it not being immediately easy. This is a very good story.

wow. this is by far the best chappie yet. i was wondering, though-- the first page of the diary is in french, but they are from scotland, and then entry that she reads is in english-- maybe she just translated it, but that is still rather odd.
severus is good. me prediction: you'll start having draco more involved with her.
update!!

The way you are writing the characters is very well done; all their actions seem totally in charcter, especially Draco, Snape and Remus. Very good!

nice. very smooth. i like remus's flashback to the library. ti reminds me of krum and hermione a bit.
update!update!udate!

good cliffie! i now officially love draco. hee. this is a very good story--the way that you are managing the sub-plots is owrking very well. keep it up!

yeah! this is very, very, good. "well, actually, I do become a bloody great monster once a month." teehee. keep writing!

wow!! this is a wonderful fic. Rain is a good character, which is unusual with new added chars. and remus is very believable. also, you ACTUALLY wrote a sorting song!! about one in a hundered people do that and aren't lazy!
draco malfoy is awesome. and so is seamus ;), i like how hermione got all made over, but that you write it so that it isn't the focal point of the story (that is so annoying...r...)
ANYWAYS, update!! update! and, oh, i dunno if you realized it, but there is a Princess Bride quote in dumbledore's speech. woohoo!!

This story is really interesting. There are some very sweet and beautiful moments, along with a bit of mystery. It flows together well.

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hey i really loved ur story and i am the person that sent u that other thing and i read ur first chappie so i read the rest and loved it keep up the good work and good luck with ur wish bye bye

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