Wow.

Wow.

Not much else I can say really.

Wow.

FalconWing.

Woah. That was incredibly amazing. I hate you still. You can write, and I remain incabable. Thanks for the dedication.

"It was the low voices of death, moaning through the stony walls of my mind, of my barricaded sanity. Blood would spill crimson stains upon the floor, and soon I was swimming in their fear, waiting for the one moment when I too would be broken. I could revel in my blissful nightmares, and no more would the pain reach me. In that state of being, I’ve a pain all my own."

That was an amazing introduction to an amazing story. Your writing is so full of emotion, and is so amazingly genuine, and true. You have a gift, and you are using it well. This is absolutely brilliant.

Don't ever stop writing-- this is amazing.

~ Hindi.

You have an amazing vocabulary and all your words are strategically placed to make the overall effect of your piece extraordinarily powerful. The ending is deep and strong and leaves me with an impact; I feel my heart going out to murderers-and I think that was the intent of your story. If so, you have definitely reached your objective. This is a magnificent piece of writing- one of the best one-shot fanfictions I have ever read.
*burgundyred
P.S. I very much approve that your spelling and grammar is correct- I hate when authors blow those off and ruin their stories. I would be extremely honored if you read any one of my stories.