This is the type of fic that brings tears to my eyes and heart. It was common knowledge that Jiro loved Mitsuko. Great work.

Matrix Taylor

Wow...in all honestly, I really want to say that I hate you for making me cry. But that was a really really good story. I mean...wow. I really do not know what to say. Although, it seems to have been a really long time since you've written this, if you're still interested, I'd like to let you know that there's a typo in Masaru's name near the end of the story. The part where Mitsuko takes him out the room so Jiro could talk with Dr. Komyoji. I don't know, it just seemed like you edited the story quite a bit.

But again, thank you for the story. I don't know if you have done any chapter fics, but I am positively sure that they would be even more splendid.

Pchu

I very much enjoyed this. It was a great story. I know very little of this anime, for it is very old and I have not seen it for quite some time, but wasn't Mitsuko an android, and was killed by the android with Gill's brain? Sorry if I am wrong. I haven't seen this in so long.

But, all in all, it was nicely written. I look foward to more of your stories.

the ending made me cry! ;;...very well written!

that was sweet

Thats crappy...

Not flamin yah, but he WAS turning human in the shows...in the last season he even bled while he cried...

But it was good...

wow... that was sad and i can't belive that... but that was sad..

I love your story...I'm crying right now because of it...very sweet, and caring. You did a great job writing it...Keep up with your writing...
Good Luck.

This was... really, really good. I really like it.

Oh my god. It's so sad it made me cry and I don't do that most of the time. the poem at the end was a tear jurker. Many stories end happyly like a fairy tale but u look at reality, that he could never become a human, that not even love could change what he was and still is. I look forward to more stories from you.

Your story was really well written. It was great and I hope to read more of your storys soon.

This story is so sad. I actually began to cry.

Poor Jiro. Awesome story! Great job!

I'm glad Jiro came back. I just hope he stays! Hurry with a next chapter!

Hey yes I get to be one of the first to submit a review to this story! Nice job so far I like the way you describe how Jiro is struggling with his new emotions I hope to see more up soon!