...amaxingly sweet...i love it ...its an amzing poetry fic that i would highly recommend ...i do hope you make more...these fics just make mai heart warm up...so do so more often!

Interesting. This has raised a lot of questions for me because the idea never really occured to me before.

I think you did a great job in depicting the sadness behind it. Very well done.

Random rambling, but I like it...
@.@ though I'm soo confused..
is the father kurama or is the kit?
although it's weird, it makes me think after wards though, nice job! ^^

A little dragged out, but otherwise quite beautiful.

Thank you for this poem. It was beautiful. I know it sounds cliche, but it touched me. Keep up the good work if you're writing anything else.
--Anica

well, that was...interesting.

but nice.

I hope to read more! *hinthint*

YnR

Myew? O.o I was kinda confused.,. but it _felt_ nice.,. and that's what's important. ^^

Yes, keep writing ficcies! ^_^ Yes, that would be good! ^^

::sighs:: How is it that I told Amberose to read it, and she reviewed before me?

::glares at Amberose:: Stupid. You didn't tell me you reviewed!

...Anyways, I REALLY like-d it. ^^

I hope you'll write more... Hiei-centric ones! U.U I like it.

I FINALLY GOT TO READ IT! This was a great story ^_^...I think its the first time I've seen you write...anything that wasn't yaoi. Hehe. This was really adorable, but it took Inari long enough :P. Hehe, Good Stuff!

I love, I love, I love! I like how you blurred everything together, and repeated the ideas. It was wonderful! So nice...::Amberose stares while drool begins to fall from her mouth:: You did great! You were so unsure of yourslef at the beginning, but you didn't need to be!! This is so much better than you give yourself credit for!!

Dat wuz relly god, exept that yo know tht Heie and Kurama arent gay rite? but if they wuz gay, this wud be a reely good stoory. you shood rite more stories where heie and krama arent gay. tell me if you do

(A random moment of stupidity from Keaira, to AoiHyou, by request. ^_^ *shifty eyes at other reviewers*)

~Keaira~

That was absolutely beautiful.

Wonderful work, please continue.

Aw...*sniff* that was so beautiful. I'm simply speechless. *sniff* Just so perfect.

::claps::

Again, a wonderfully creative and poetic work by the almighty Aoi-imouto! Though that was sad... when the little kitsune died... :(

or maybe i'm just interpreting stuff wrong again... that happens a lot... I'm more of a direct thinker than i am a metephorical thinker. I need to work on that "finding the deeper meaning to things" train of thought...

Anyway... i hope you keep writing!

luvvies

MY GOD THIS IS... PERFECT!
I didn't find it confusing at all!
THIS IS ABOUT THE BEST DANG FIC I'VE READ!
Angst or no angst this seems like something that could've really happend... I loved it!