great story!!

This story was full of surprises! I thought that this would just be fun, sexy, political backstabbing but the plot and the action blew me away. As always, Draco and Ginny's relationship played out very nicely and I loved all the plot twists, cliffhangers and politics involved in this fic. I did find the characters' motives kind of shaky, especially Neville's and Danika's, and after a while, the Malfoys' duty to the unicorns became a bit too fairytale and like "WE HAVE TO SAVE THE UNICORNS!". But the rest of the story was great - you're a really good writer.

Wow. I loved this story. As I said in a previous review, it is not very often that a fanfiction is able to catch me unawares but you did several times and it was wonderful. D/G is my favorite ship and I thought I'd seen it all, but I'm very glad you proved me wrong. The farther into the story I went the more real they got. It is very impressive! The magic followed close enough to the Potterverse but added something new to spice it up. And your extension on the Malfoys was lovely. While I thought the ending a bit anticlimactic, I can see why you ended it there. It reminded me of the part of their relationship that intrigued me the most. Your description of their connection after she fixes the shield was, for lack of a better word, magical. I got shivers ^_^ So ending like that makes sense. And Ron finally coming to his senses was adorable, btw.

Keep writing!

with luck and love
-Lady C

bwahaha. that was lovely. I have read a lot of fanfiction (no really, a LOT) and you are the first to surprise me in a long time. I expected Darien to be not what he seemed but I didn't expect you to let on so soon, nor for there to be such an understanding between him and Draco. I also really enjoy your characterization of Ginny. Not only is she complicated on the surface but she's complicated underneath too, and she keeps the mask up even when by herself. Kudos to you (with chocolate chips!)!
I look forward to finishing reading ^_^

with luck and love
Lacy C

I've been plowing through this story for days. It's like a good dose of chocolate. I didn't have time to review after each chapter, but I just ... melted when I read the part about "not for me"
I think the thousand cherubs around me were squeeing in delight. I had to review. So there. Your story is the BEST story in every way.

Loved the story!
Haha I picked up on the American Presidnet similarities right at the end when they were explaining they didn't shoot down the legislation for one another.
Well done!

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Why aren't you using Ginerva instead of Virginia?

Hmm, I'm not sure if I liked the way you made Ginny react to Draco's speach to Ron about him and Ginny being a couple is just a lie. Ginny told Ron herself that it wasn't real. She should know that Draco is just covering both their tails, like she did.

Other than that, excellent work!

Great story! Nice Job

OMG Awesome Cliffie!
-AceCade

Awesome!
-AceCade

I KNEW IT!! Draco is one smart cookie lol

-AceCade

Awesome! Hopefully Hermione will get a clue. is Michael Michael Corner, one of the dudes Ginny dated?

-AceCade

Awesome!
-AceCade

AWESOMELY AMAZING!

-AceCade