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PlantangelJchan
2008-02-09
ch 10,
abuseOMG IT'S BEEN TOO LONG FOR THELOVE OF AL THAT IS GOOD AND HOLY PLEASE UPDATE THIS i AM POSITIVELY HOOKED ON IT PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME HANGIN! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE VASH BEGS YOU UPDATE TOT.
Matsuda-san
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abuseWow. I`m crying again... ;-;
I love how your fanfiction`s angst is bittersweet. Absolutely gorgeous job, m`dear. Butbut.. shouldn`t there be an extra.. heehee... chapter...? ^__~' *hinthint*
covey~~~Pops
2005-06-26
ch 4, anon.
abusedamn! i read that right through and didnt realize till the end i had read chapter 3. I started on chapter 3! LOL! I loved it! you can write! i will start from chapter one this time. ^_^
jak'idiot
2005-05-29
ch 10,
abusewow this is awsome DONT FORGET ABOUT IT this is the first trigon fic ive read but you are such a good wrighter this is awsom thanx
Riza the Feline
2005-04-06
ch 10,
abuseWhere is the update? I hope you update soon this story is the kewelist. Update soon.
Tongari0104721
2005-04-06
ch 10,
abuseHi,
YOU OWE US A LEMON!! FOR MILLY'S SAKE!! Really, you could at least fullfill Milly's last wish in detail. *huff* Other than that, great story!And HA! I think I know why WOlfwood couldn't heal Milly or Meryl! It's because Plants are what are spreading the desease, and Vash is a Plant, so Wolfwood couldn't heal them because Vash was too close! Right? Man, poor Tongari's just gonna die when they figure that out . . . But, it all makes sence. This ton isn't infected because their Plant is down, and aren't Plants man-made? 'Cause if they are, then that explains why they are out of the Creators sight; because He didn't create them! ^.^ And, if you've already made this perfectly clear and all, (which you have) and if all the readers are supposed to get it long ago, (are they? 'cause I figured it out a while back.) I'M NOT STUPID FOR SAYING IT THIS LATE! And I still say you owe us a lemon. But keep writing; just because I know what the probem is, doesn't mean I know how they fix it. ^.^ And by the way, PLEASE let Wolfwood stay with Vash, PLEASE!! Well, I'll see you when you update.
Bye!
Kitty Meow
2004-11-27
ch 10,
abuse;__; Dang...you write one amazing story!! I've just finished reading your previous 9 chapters ( all in one sitting ^^;) and I have to say that this is an amazing story that you've started. I love your idea; it's so very original and refreshing to read. Though I'm a Catholic myself (>__> w/ very strange tendencies), I will honestly tell you that "sacriligious" content in your story is kept to a minimum, which is always nice to see ^^ I really do love your writing and I hope you update w/ the next chapter soon!!
Spencers13
2004-09-24
ch 10,
abuseWhoa, baby! You finally got the chapter out! I've been waiting for quite a while! ^_^ Good things come to those who wait, huh? I loved it. Very sweet and gentle at the end, something I've been looking forward to. Next chapter sounds exciting, and I can't wait to see it too! :D
Foresythe
2004-09-23
ch 10,
abuseI thought you were gonna go all they way! (joking)

Anyway, great chapter and it's good that I didn't see the last part beforehand or that could've killed it for me.

More chapters soon -- well more of when you can write them. :3
MetalKatt
2004-09-23
ch 10,
abuseI was so happy to see this chapter pop up in my inbox tonight. I just recently re-read this story, and I admit, it pulled a few tears.

I live the way you're showing the conflict between what they should do and what they do--they say the road to Hell is paved with good intentions. Makes me wonder what kinds of bricks Knives is laying down.

You have me on the edge of my figurative seat with this ending; I'm terribly worried about the state of Nick's eternal soul. I don't want him to end up damned, and I know Vash wouldn't, either. I'm half expecting Vash to pull away and refuse simply because he will not hurt anyone, or even let them hurt themselves. (You're such a good author that you're pulling me right into the story. Go, you!)

Normally, I'd put in some sort of constructive criticism like "Check your mixed pairs; I found a few errors her and here," or "It might help if you finished out a paragraph before switching to the other man's thoughts," but I honestly cannot think of anything else that would improve this story, save for more of it. You even know how to correctly use a semicolon, and that's rare to find these days. ;-)

I look forward to your future chapters, and hope your muse snuggles inside your head to stay in this and all your other creative endeavours.

--Metalkatt
bigsby
2004-09-23
ch 10,
abuse:D

Oh, you don't know how wonderful that was! Or ... maybe you do, but I wanted to tell you how great it was anyway. So descriptive! I felt tears in my eyes when Wolfwood showed Vash his wings.. and ... and... *sniffles* Jeeze, so sweet! You simply MUST write more, ASAP! I'm looking forward to it!
AngelHideki
2004-06-21
ch 4,
abuse*snickers*
Heh... I -love- that last line. Verry kewl. I might have to steal it.

lol, anyway, I love the chapter! Verry spiff! oo; And I love the demons. They sound so cool!
...xx; Well, they do.

...*smiles cheerfully* Yay! Spiffy story! *goes off to read more!*
Raven of the Dark
2004-06-19
ch 9,
abuseYAY! I finally got to reading this chapter. *sniffles* Aww, Poor Vash and Wolfwood... I feel kinda sorry for 'em both...
AngelHideki
2004-06-09
ch 2,
abuseI am a man... er... woman of my word! XD Anyway, this is a GREAT story so far.
...--; Yeah, I'm a horrible person. I just now started on it. Bad, evil Angel...
oo; Oh, yeah. If you forgot, I'm the Wufei cosplayer from A-Kon. XD The one with the badly put together costume.
lol, anyway, yeah. Reviewing... focus...
Yes. It's a beautiful story. Well written and extremely interesting... *spaces out for a minute*
...Hai. Very spiffy. Mew! Well, off to read more!
The Yaoi Goddess
2004-06-08
ch 9, anon.
abuseOi... To lazy to sign in today... -_-; I ment to read this sooner but my own plans to start writting some things after ALL (and I mean ALL of them!) of my muses decided to go to Sidny for a few weeks and also decided to get lost at the airport! >_< Damn my luck! Now all my plans have also gone out the proverbial window... Oi. Anyways. This is getting good. I'm hocked! ^__^
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