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Haruhi.Hime
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
lol i was so nt expecting that! haha
Phamtom of the Pie
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
SO FREAKING HILARIOUS, I LOVE IT.

I WOULD SCREAM PROFANITY-LADEN DECLARATIONS OF LOVE, BUT MY BRAIN HAS EXPLODED FROM THE AWESOME.

(I am not disappointed by the lack of **. I am -not-)
ANN
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
such adorable story~
its such a shindo thing to say "those jeans makes you look fat" hahaha..so blunt, no one would guess he's true intention.
azab
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
i loved it
Akimi24
2009-04-26 . chapter 1
hehehe that Hikaru staring at something he would never do XD
funny fic!
mime
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
ACTUAL LOL.
Whispering Darkness
2008-01-06 . chapter 1
^-^ Oh my gosh! I laughed so hard when I read this, the end was great! I love it!
Daemon Queen Lilith
2007-03-03 . chapter 1
*_*
There is nothing more I can say...
DigitalWing
2007-01-06 . chapter 1
What an imaginative mind!! I can't picture Touya Akira wearing those pair of jeans at all!! No wonder Hikaru was distracted!! 10/10 if I can rate this!! XD
b4k4 ch4n
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
LMAO!
Omg! Those jeans make you look fat? Where did THAT come from? HAHAHAHA! Unexpected ending but I totally love it!

"Touya performed his amazing Appear Out of Nowhere Behind Your Back and Scare the ** Out of You trick" Yeah, I wish I had his trick xD Good one!

If only Sai was there, I would have loved to hear what he would say xDD

Great story!
zoomboom
2006-06-18 . chapter 1
Oh,this is so good ! I like the " brain in Hikaru's pants "
- jusy, yet not too mach

just great !
Samara-chan
2006-01-31 . chapter 1
Ahh! I read this a while ago; I have to say it's utterly BRILLIANT. Best line... well, you know what I mean by that ^_^ Gawd, this fic is ineffable.
kataru
2005-11-12 . chapter 1
ugh,... the best...! XD XD XD
anmah
2005-06-16 . chapter 1
BWA HAHAHA! HILARIOUS! GREAT JOB! LOVED IT!
kari2500
2005-05-24 . chapter 1
omg, I was rolling on the floor laughing.

i totally didnt expect shindou to call touya's **, fat.
i thought he was going to say something like,
"Touya, those jeans make you look sexy."
i mean he kept saying how hot touya's ** was.
but i guess its for the best since im pretty sure that after that, touya will never wear those tight jeans again.

well anyway, it was a joy to read such a funny story.
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