Amazing. It was perfectly in character and it was a real glimpse into the behind the scenes stuff... Great job!

Also, this is linked on the Rosa Farrell fanlisting. :3

I loved it. You are an awesome author. You can put emotion into a story as though you're pouring ink into a porcelain jar. It's...amazing. I wish I could do that. My stories don't get anywhere near that deep.

That was amazing. It truly had me captivated, sitting in one spot 'til the end. No problems, here. The emotion is powerful but not overbearing and you managed to make Rosa seem strong which a lot of writers fail to do. Nice work!

wow, very vivid and captivating story.. Kain was pretty much a time bomb ready to explode and you did a great job in letting him unleash his hidden feelings for Rosa :) I wonder how Rosa felt after everything he just said to her? Keep up the great work and I hope to read more of your fan fics :)

ACK! Can't believe I overlooked this >>'

Well, nice retelling of an interesting part in the game. Good to see that you added more depth to it... You did well with Rosa and Kain (capturing their personalities I mean).

Uh... I would like to go on, but I'm in a bit of a rush...

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