A short but very effective piece of writing, perhaps could have worked on the description a little more, but for the style of the work it was very successful at creating a large impact in a short amount of time. Good job.

Short and very, very sweet. I'm not sure what the challenge was, but the product is lovely.

Short, but oh so powerful. I can think of a million meanings for that last line, but my favorite interpretation probably wouldn't go over too well with Squall/Rinoa fans. Hm. Anyways, loved it.