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Excellent fic as always. Didn't expect that Dark Heart would split from his older self, but in the end, he was finally defeated.

Keep up the good work, yo!

I was WONDERING when Defender Bear and Wish Bear's relationship would get off the ground, consider you refer to it in each of your friggin' stories. Good job.

[...unWARP!]

Good evening.

For a moment there I thought this story was part of Sun-Tzu's chronology, hence, I wondered where the Care Takers were, lol.

Still, you managed to write a great story here! Kinda reminds me of a fanfic I *hand*-wrote several years ago, with the Care Bears destroying Dark Heart, and six others like him!

Keep up the great work!

And check out my stories here on ffn and !

Until next time, remember:

I AM THE J.A.M.

Good evening.

[WARP!]

Wow your an excelent writter.I really got sucked into this story.

Really good story! I'm looking forward to more, and I can't wait to see what happens with Wish and Defender Bear..

I liked it! Here's to many more!

I read this last night, and I loved it! It was well worth the wait. I look forward to your next story.