 lamia in crapula 2009-10-29 . chapter 2really great story you have here and not only this one, liked the others quite, too.
don't know if somebody already pointed out but in the second chapter is a little mistake. it starts with harry noticing, he's been inside for six years and eleven months and later in the chapter it is only five years since he's there.
but nevertheless I really really like your kind of writing and showing the characters |
 Miss Mercury101 2009-10-28 . chapter 4This is excellent so far. Your potrayal of Harry, seems to me, to be quite realistic even though, perhaps, the acquisition of his new powers whilst in Azkaban isn't so realistic. Anyway, that is crucial to the story, I think, so I won't nitpick anymore. I love the Animagi forms you've chosen for Harry, and as for Sean Cassidy teaching at Hogwarts, *slow grin*, well I can't wait to see how that's going to play out. |
 The Dark Goddess Kari 2009-10-14 . chapter 4Hey! My name's Cassidy! xD
And it was verrah good, methinks. <3 |
 KaiPhoenix 2009-10-11 . chapter 4Y'know, I've learned that when you truly reach a point where you don't like someone or they have disappointed you beyond what you thought was possible (like betrayal of fundamental things), it's quite possible to dislike them so much, not quite hate, that you don't really think about them overly much.
Just enough for 'Yeah, I probably will never be friends with them. EVER.' After that, they just don't seem all that important.
I like how you've written Harry's thoughts and actions on such matters.
-Kai |
 Stinuli 2009-09-30 . chapter 4This is definetly one of the best Harry ends up in azkaban stories I have ever read!! :D
Cant wait for more! :) |
 Davien Lucifer Winters 2009-09-28 . chapter 4Aw...*sniff*. I found it, I read it, and then I was sad. I'm not saying it was bad or anything, I loved it! It was just the fact that it ended that made me weep so...I read too many romanticised verses...I really do. |
 anniecherie13 2009-09-26 . chapter 4Absolute genius!
I love a cynical Harry :D
please do continue |
 WRockSimi. 2009-09-24 . chapter 4Hmm, I'm still not sure what to feel for this type of plot.
It usually goes like this; Harry gets accused of such and such. Naturally all the backwards-snivelling-sheep turn their backs. He gets sent to Azkaban and then he still ends up saving their asses and forgives them once they find he's innocent. -shudders disgustedly whilst trying not to gag-
That's why I'm cautious to this fic but I'm also very curious to see where you'll take it. I'm definitely going to give it a chance. Can't wait for more.
P.S. Sorry if there are any grammar errors. Got to work on 'em. -smiles sheepishly- |
 dontcallmemadeline 2009-09-23 . chapter 4This is a great story, if slightly creepy. But i imagine that's the effect you're going for. Please update soon! |
 narmoture 2009-09-23 . chapter 4I feel this story is going to be INSANELY good (heh, pun intended). XD |
 Crowskin 2009-09-23 . chapter 4I notice this was started in '03... Which brings me around to begging for regular updates. Yes. Please do. |
 I. Evelyn 2009-09-21 . chapter 4Fantastic chapter and fic :) I can't wait to see what comes next, this is incredibly interesting. |
 kill4blood 2009-09-21 . chapter 4the story rocks and i cant wait for the next chappie |
 PandaFusion 2009-09-13 . chapter 4I'm beginning to feel that every story you write is destined to end up on my story alert list. xD |
 Kuraiyoshi 2009-09-10 . chapter 4Ohmigosh! I fugging love your story, love! I was floating in bliss for awhile after reading this chapter, and even more so when I found that you’ve just recently updated it. I’m hungry for more, so puh-lease update soon~ I need some sound entertainment in my otherwise dull life. |