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| AuronLu 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseA late arrival on the scene of Aulu fandom makes up for lost time. Your pieces are some of the classics. I think this is the best of the three (it's three, right)? Lulu in the elements is most appropriate for her. But oh, I wish you'd kept writing. Your Auron haunts the edges, and I want to see more of him. |
| _______ 2005-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't read much Auron/Lulu stuff, but I enjoyed this one; I like the way the rain lets Lulu express herself, and Auron's lending her his coat; it is sweet, without being sappy. Nice job! |
| Ocean of the Night 2004-01-22 ch 1, | abusehey, its goin realy gud so far. hurry n put more chapters up..i like stories bout lulu n auron...all da others are about Rikku n Auron...hm |
| wewe 2003-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abusehuh!!AUlulu! |
| Golden Rose3 2003-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI just read the this and the other two stories in the "Loved You Always" series. This is the best one yet; the best line is "From now on, I think I'll let the sky shed my tears for me". I usually like Lulu/Wakka better, but your're making Aululus grow on me! I hope to se the next installment soon! ~Golden Rose |
| Monou Hakkai 2003-11-14 ch 1, | abuseWow I just read your second installation to this Auron/Lulu saga and now I have read this one too. It's so well-written. I could really, REALLY read Lulu's thoughts and easily picture her in my mind while she was walking in the rain. My God, her voice was realistic too. Well done for writing so well in the first person. "Fake or real, a smile is always more beautiful than tears." That was the most memorable quote from the story. Auron, you are one intelligent man. I'm sure Lulu is much more cheered up now since he said that (XD). I hope you update soon. |
| Hiro-Gema 2003-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey it's been awhile since I review any of your work but I have to say good work like all your others hope to see more of your work soon and I mean soon. Auron x Lulu forever! |
| TheBlackRaveness 2003-11-01 ch 1, | abuse::squee:: It's bootiful! i hope to read another story in the series soon! It's a lot better than anything I could ever write. I'm envious. ::tries to steal your muse:: |
| The Rushing Wind 2003-10-29 ch 1, | abuseOh, its an Auron x Lulu fic. How rare. :) I really liked it. The only thing is that I can't picture Auron being tender--even for a moment. But that's my issue. :) And I loved the last line ('I think I'll let the sky shed my tears for me') Hm, I suppose I'll have to read your first two stories now. :) |
| Star 2003-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's CUTE! It's all fluffy!! ^_^ Great job!! If your other stories are like this than you'll be seeing a lot of me! |
| The Jack of Spades 2003-10-29 ch 1, | abuseOh... *cries* So profound and to-the-point. Your comparison of the rain and Lulu's tears was so vivid, it inspired me to go ahead with a fan art idea (but, I'll get back to you on the ML about that ;). And yes, this explains Lulu's words to Auron on Mt. Gagazet. Very well done (and I'm so happy to hear there's more. Kudos to you an the few other authors who give me reasons to visit this section - and you all know who you are ;). And...wow, thanks for the dedication! :D I'm glad I inspired you! |