 syla 2009-08-29 . chapter 1the end os kinda scary 0.0 |
 star2000shadow 2008-02-05 . chapter 1'Shudder' this was good. and so to the point..
I wouldn't mind learning how he got Duo from point A to point B like that. or what happens after that last bit. |
 Abi2 2006-03-16 . chapter 1whoah. Mental issues much? |
 Blind_Lightning_King 2004-12-22 . chapter 1 Wow-that was weird...though cool. By the way, is it Quatre, Trowa, or Heero that Duo keeps referring to as 'you'? Just curious, I don't need a definite answer if you don't have one. Oh, and the slight S&M/bondage-y type thing is a little unexpected, but nice. And the nice coloring imagery was really nicely worded, too. As a reminder, you might want to clear up who the 'you'is-it's just a recurring mystery.
Blind_Lightning_King |
 Paprikacha 2004-12-06 . chapter 1...that was a damn creepy fic. And let me assure you, I've read some pretty damn creepy fics on this site. And considering I'm a yaoi writer, _nothing_ should creep me out. Chica, you deserve a medal. |
 Shades of Grey 2004-03-04 . chapter 1 Hell that was scary. And twisted. And even better than the last one. Quatre is...er...disturbed, isn't he? I can personally recommend a good pyschologist though. You are an incredible writer, but I'm wondering, do you write things like that in your English class? If so, maybe your English teacher would like to come to the pyschologist too? On a serious note though, I think this shows some incredible insights to self-harmers. You are very perceptive.
Write more depressing fics! Angst is good!! |
 firedraygon 2004-01-18 . chapter 1Whoa, Quatre's freakish in this fic. o.O I like it. ^^ Please write more soon!
~fd97 |
 Daeleniel Shadowphyre 2004-01-06 . chapter 1O.O! ...That was the sickest, most terrifyingly disturbing thing I have ever read in my entire ** life. And I've read some REALLY disturbing ** before. |
 merurikku 2003-12-12 . chapter 1holy CRAP this is amazing! my poor poor duo though...*sniff* ah well sucks for him i loved it. i didn't even have words when i got to the end...NO WORDS! you honor the world by being alive and writing things like this. *bow* toodles!
-Meru |
 Bree In Diamonds 2003-11-17 . chapter 1creepy. loved it. awesome job |
 Pixeh Pixeh Pixeh 2003-11-14 . chapter 1wow... just... oh my god wow. this made me cry... this was amazing, just... so amazing. you capture the abusee's need for pain and suffering to exist normally perfectly... how many times have i said Duo's almost exact words?
this was just... wow. sorry to repeat myself, but this was amazing beyond words. this is 5* material and you are an amazing author. i'm just off to read somethign else of yours, if it's all half as good as this, then you get my sincerest congratulations.
*ana Angel |
 Mystik-chan(not signed in) 2003-11-11 . chapter 1 ME LOVES! ME LOVES LIKE HELL!
I love your portrayal of both Quatre and Duo, I love your writing style, I love it all so much I'm scaring myself.
well-written, dark, and angsty, with a bastard Quatre and a torture-loving Duo. My favourite. ^^ |
 black luna 2003-10-30 . chapter 1 Lovely angst... That fic was good, though I _was_ a bit unnerved by Quatre's behavior.
Well-written fic, that was. |
 Lee 2003-10-28 . chapter 1 Dark and Creepy. I've read To Die With Open Eyes. All I can think to say it that you're bloody brilliant. |
 Anonymous 2003-10-28 . chapter 1 I can't think of anything to say to that except for: wow. Just wow. |