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| Riyna 2004-04-18 ch 1, | abuse*sniff*This was a great fic, and it's really good for your first shot at an angst fic...*sniffs some more*...*smiles* And it has FLAMESHIPPING!*dances around*I'll have to check out your other fics, too. ^_~ ~Riyna-chan~ |
| Vilya 2003-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello there! First of all, I want to say that you picked a great topic for this one-shot. It seems like Garet does get picked on a lot, and no one really focuses on how it makes him feel. Nice job! The story here was great. I loved it, and it was very realistic. So I come to my proposition. If you look for a little while around the GS section, you'll find my fic collection, entitled "The Golden Sun One-Shot Panoply" -- maybe you've seen it. I want to know if you would agree to submitting a one-shot for the Panoply. If you would, please email me and I'll send you the guideline stuff. If not, that's fine too. Keep writing great fics! |
| IgnitedFluffy 2003-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI can really relate to Garet. Except for the ending... Stupid lovebirds. -_-X |
| Houzuki Akane 2003-10-31 ch 1, | abuseExcellent one-shot, Omniflyer! The angst was just okay; not bad! :) Garet's anger was described very well! Great flameshipping! :D |
| Ivan of Vault 2003-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseLITTLE MIDGET!? NO SEQUEL!? SEND IN THE RENFORCEMENTS!...AGAIN! (Zephyr) SUGAR! (Mold) PIXIE STIX! |
| Midnight C 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuseNot bad for a first angst fic...not bad at all! I especially like that it's written in the first person--not many writers in this section have done so and done well with it. Plus, this is the side of Garet that we rarely see and yet surely must exist. And Flameshipping...gotta love that too. ^^ Bravo! I look forward to what you have in store for us, Omniflyer! I'd hoped I hadn't seen the last of you! |
| Arowyn 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* That was WONDERFUL! Awesome job, Omniflyer! Jenna: The best story ever! Hey! Jenna: ^_^ Anyway, this was lovely, well-written, and I absolutely LOVE how you portrayed Garet! Too many people have him as a lunkhead with an IQ of 8...it's very irritating. Best of all, this was Flameshipping!Jenna and I are very happy, if you couldn't tell. No sequel to Faces of War? Darn...you left so much room for one! Oh well, can't wait for your next fic! *adds to Favorites* |
| Wild Knightblazer 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuse...That...was beautiful, man. And for a first shot at angst, it was great! Or...at least better than I could've done... I'm still hoping you'll keep up this level of quality...^_^ And that's about it... |
| Alexditto 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuseAlex: This is really good... and I'm not one for mushy stuff, but even so, I thought it was wonderful. Sour: *Cries* That was... touching... Alex: Yeah... well, you really hit home on this one. I love it! See you later! |
| Anzu Rose 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuseYay! A new Fic. I found your last one and I loved it. I just didn't reveiw cause I thought since it was completed you wouldn't cheak. It's a good angast fic. I don't like the one chapters ones. It wasn't bad. You rely made the feelings seep genuine. I'll be looking out for your new fic. |
| Akiko 2003-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseTo tell you the truth, it's a bit melodramatic... But other than that, yay! Garet angst fic! You don't see a lot of these...but I really can see it happening. My poor Garet-kun. T.T Anywho, keep up the good work and stuff! |
| SirGecko 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuseWell, it's about damn time someone else covered Garet's emotions well! You're one of the few! Excellent one-shot. Keep it up. |
| Star Requiem 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuseAw... Poor Garet... Ahh but atleast there's a happy ending! :) Very well written, keep it up! ^__^ |