That's very good, you ahould write more poetry. However, as far as critisism goes, 'revenging is not a word, and fatal death is kinda repetitive
I love 'from body to bone' it makes the poem seem so real, 'purity's touch from heaven's light' is just so wonderful! anywya, I loved it.

awsome great i probally realise that this is one of your first maybe not sure but the poetry is great it gives the felling of both woman and their hearts as you say the look alike but what moves them both is completly different great job

-cries-that is the best poem ive ever read

that was great...I really liked it lol, write more like it soon!