Please keep going! It's quite enjoyable. 'Catch Me' is really good! :D

Nyeh! It was just gettin' good! D: Though I wonder... is Aphreal in any other fan-fics? I mean, you draw her all the time with Kouga and have him and Sesshoumaru in that one picture fighting over her... =/ Or are those just like, illustartions of future happenings?

LOL I'm so impatient...

This story is amazing! It's one of the few stories that had GREAT spelling and punctuation and sophistication and still has a great storyline. Please update soon!

Ja-Ne!

Where can I begin in reviewing a story like this? Let me first say that when I first read the full summary I was afraid that your original character might turn out to be a Mary Sue. Smite me for ever thinking such a thing about Aphreal Sin! She's cool! Sesshoumaru is still in character! Huzzah!

The way Sess took Kagome's bag and threw all the mysterious contents around is just too cute. It's fun to see Sesshoumaru ignorant about something, for once. Hahahaha...!

(At this point in the review, the black-clad Lord Sesshoumaru from Miss O'Brien's story "The City of Zyastron" appeared out of nowhere and gave Miss O'Brien a scary glare. This successfully quieted her laughter.)

Moving on... This third chapter has ensured that I am officially hooked. The descriptions of Sesshoumaru's palace are magnificent! You have quite a talent for utilising the English language in a way that is both poetic and intelligent. What's more, I have yet to detect a misspelled word or grammatical error. Sadly, that kind of flawlessness is a rare thing among fanfiction these days. I must applaud you. (applauds)

There is one suggestion I have: You might consider indicating in some way the changing of a scene. As it is, it's a little confusing to suddenly shift from one time to another. Just a thought.

I look forward to the next update! ^_^

ok for me it was a little Deep.
Oh and thanx for reviewing My InuXMas story Ok now the Thing About the Captialization Its just Habit ok so Gomen.
Well
Ja Ne!
Dog Ears

Hello! I told you I'd read your stories! The picture I saw you drawing in class makes sense now! Your story is really neat, keep going! I really like Sesshomaru... and it's funny because I used to hate him when I first started watching the series. I thought he was so mean to Inuyasha! But then when he saved Rin's life I was like aw! And I realized that Sesshomaru kicks **. So I like your story cause it's about fluffy. He's coming up in my story, in the chapter after the next one I am going to post... and it's about time, too! I have 12 chapters so far! But anyway, enough about me. I think your story has good beginnings and I can't wait until you post the next one! So hurry up already! And I'll see you in class!
~Kater

Finnally after seeing all those pictures you do I get to read the first chapter. I hope you get the next one up soon!

please continue the story it was realy cool so can u please continue the story for me please

Wow! So well-descripted and almost made me feel like I was there watching the whole scene in person...@_@! Anywho, I love this story, it looks to be promising. Please update soon!

*!!*Deadly Tears*!!*

Good first chapter. I liked it and I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. Well, I'd like it if you read some of my fics.

~Melissa~