I love this. This is a story that can not fail to make you smile. Nice job!

Just wondering, but what is Jessica's full name? Could you add it in the next chapter?

please update soon

Well, I already told you that I am not much of a writer (basically I slept through most of English class and well a lot I have suffered for it). Though one person I used to Role-Play with might claim it to not be a problem.

Lets see...
Well it is the, character gets sucked into the world of something they either like or enjoy theme. But funnily enough I like how you pulled it off. In fact you managed to grab my attention and snap me out of trying to hold my eyes open for a bit. Which must be a plus (before I drank the coffee to be precise), while I haven't read much in the way of fan-fiction; a few Role-Plays [attempted original mostly] I have flicked through and passed on easily enough. But your writing grabbed me long enough to enjoy it.

So, yeah I'm sure I'll be reading more of this. :D

Moving on,

You managed to keep up the mystery of the new figure in an interesting way and I liked it. It was kept to the point which could be/often is a good thing. As I said before I'm not a writer, so I won't say what you should or should not do. Simply, while it worked out fine, for a moment I had a sense of doubt (or I thought I did) as to the mysterious figure's existence. He was there, I knew that, the effect of mystery was communicated indeed. I can't quite put my finger on it but for some reason I keep feeling like he was transparent to the scene; as if he wasn't there.

Kind of like how, a 3D modeler for instance creates a character and plants it in the scene but the character looks weightless. How could it look weightless, the proportions are right, the build is solid - but they didn't put weight on the sole of the foot. The character seems to float on the ground.

Now, a quote on J.N in as good as it gets would be "I mean, I'm drowning here! And you're describing the water!" Or to that effect, so as I said I can't tell you what to do and what not to - until I become a colleague and investigate some do's and don'ts myself. At least you didn't describe the water. :D

So far I picked up on (in this early read) a location of trees, flowers, grass that becomes taller, leaves and twigs everywhere. A forest or woodland? I'm not sure that I grab how easily or not they are moving in their current environment.

PS: Still loved the read! :D I don't do nearly enough ^.^;

Please update soon, this has been most enjoyable, keep up the great work!

Idril

Very interesting!

Hey loved the story. If i was there i would end up make people worry that i had gone mad. course with out my friend there i probablly woould. i wait with baited breath for the next chapter. Until next time
~Moon Shadow Demon

I sorta stumbled across this fic and I absolutely adore it! It made me laugh so hard, I felt like a fool! I'm so excited for the next chapter update, whenever that may be. This is so funny, I'm truly enjoying it. Keep up the fantastic work!

love the description! the way she gets into Middle Earth is original. Fantastic story and keep up the good work!

This is really cute. I like it alot! O who is it? Gotta go read the next chapter!!
Namarie

Cool story you have there! I hope that you're planning to continue it... you will right?

This story is great! It's really funny, and great that it's just a simple girl in ME. And not a Mary Sue story. Hope you update soon.

Heh heh, funny! I love this story so far! Yep, I'd definatly get all of them to teach me how to sword fight, shoot arrows and weild an axe! Sounds like fun! *Girns* Please update soon!

this is a very good story. I was a little confused though because in some of the chapters you switch from 1st person to 3rd persont throughout them. Just something maybe you should try to work on. Update soon!

Hi! I'm back who
Okay, uhm.
I know she (jess) basically comes from a right now and then goes to 'a parllel place' (if you know what i mean, i just woke up)
Typing as i read again:
How did she learn elvish? people speak elvish? i'm just a bit confused, which is some of my own doing, being that i havent really kept up on all this stuff, other than people can speak Klingon (Star Trek, in case you have no idea, some people think i have 3 heads. I dont speak it, but i k now people do)
Ok, this one i dont have much to complain about yay! it was good (not that the rest was bad, its all good, but i had no pet peeves to gripe about this time ^^)
!nightcat