Good job
Face is my member of the team. I love reading stories that have my favorite person in a show with angst or tragedy.

I love how you had him thinking back to his time being on the streets. And how it wasnt so mushy when him and the col were talking.

I just wanted to let you know that I loved the story. The way you went from the present situation to the case and hinted at Face's past was done very well. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories.

I also liked the ending. Once again, I get a very visual picture of the team and their antics. I especially like where Murdock winks at Face before following B.A. into the kitchen. Just enough ambiguity in the gesture to show he knows B.A. is about to react. Thank you, again.

This is my favorite chapter.

I love the visual I get when you describe Face and B.A. running to the back alley, and the description of the whole confrontation. Nice build. Wonderful culmination of the previous chapters. I love how we stay in Face's head, and how his perception doesn't give us all the details, but enough to very easily picture what the rest of the team might be thinking and feeling and doing. Great job.

Thank you for writing this story. It was very enjoyable. I particularly liked the connection you made with Face's history and how it impacted him in the current day. Oftenn it may not be one specific event, but the mind makes the connections. Very well done psychologically. I also appreciated how you conveyed the relationships and solidarity among the team- keying in on the nonverbal rather than having touchy, feely conversations". As others have mentioned, excellent character development.

I really liked this story~! Glad you decided to finish this C:

Wonderful story, my friend, and a perfect ending, with Face and Smith having a talk that wasn't too much of 'a talk', if you know what I mean...
I can't say enough about your writing skills, but I'm sure you get that by now ;)
Just ONE of my favorite lines:
"And none of it really seemed real, so maybe none of it really was real. And maybe it didn’t even matter."
Great work!
Love! Belker

Aww, this was really good. The bantering, Face's insecurity, Hannibal... I don't know, all of it seemed really in-character. Or what would be in-character if the show had actually had some in-depth character development.
Anyway, it's really good. Thanks for sharing!

Wow...this was wonderfully done! Excellent story!

Loved it! BA's anguish as he gets skimmed milk is just fab! Good conclusion, I was interested to see how you were going to end this, and you did a great job. Yay for Ice cream. I may have to raid my freezer now.

Great story, like it! Hope you continue soon, I'd like to know what's going on. :)

Great story! I really hope you're gonna update the next chapter soon! I saw you had this on a long long hiatus. I'm glad you decided to continue writing on this again, cause I really want to know what's going on with Face~! C:

I love it. I'm very fond of Facey, and your story seemed to catch his character in a very different light to the show, which always made him seem a little bit shallow you know? Anyway, keep up the good work, I'm enjoying the new dimensions a lot! :D

Dude, I could SEE it. I always love watching Face fight in the series...the way he often starts a bit hesitantly, like he's afraid to ruin his suit, but when he's really in the thick of it he just flings himself into the bad guys with dangerous abandon. He always fights for a reason, not for fun, and that reason is usually because someone he cares about will be in it if he doesn't. A great and complex character--I'm so glad you're exploring him for us!

So I've been reading this story, happily chugging along, when I hit the conversation between the guys and Amy and I about choked on my glee. Such amazing characterization! Amy, hardly anyone ever gets Amy, but you have her dead on...and I do like a good Murdock and this here is a good Murdock. Fantastic^42.