cool cant wait for the next chapter!

This is really great! carry on.

SOunds very interesting, I like better the idea of Spike as a ghost than a normal vamp, cause otherwise, it will be second Angel and honestly, I hate when people died and keep returnin, it's an insult to Glenn's departure. Anyway, please write more. What about Dennis? I?m sure he would be happy to see Cordy again! As I already said, MORE PLEASE!

C'est merveilleux! Er...is that pronounced correctly? I was never that great at memorizing French words, their stupid masculine and feminine rules always making the language seem forbidding. Ahem, to the the point of this review.

So far it's plain. Just fine. In my opinion you should've started out with Cordelia waking up disoriented and all, her emotions and physical state in a whirlwind of chaos. But then this is quite fine. I enjoyed the way you concentrated on Spike's emotions. Although don't always make Spike the good/right person in everything, basically he has no fault in situations basically turning him into a Gary Stue (a perfect character with no faults completely). The dab of Fred trying to get Spike corporealized shows of Fred's optimistic, hardworking nature. No grammar or spelling mistakes, the necessity of a good writer! And Cordelia automatically trying to defend herself against a supposedly still "evil" Spike was excellent. You set the mood perfect, showing both character's emotions.

Ahem, now that my ranting is finished, I shall add you to my Favourite List of stories and await an update.

~Auroris~

This is really boring. I don't care what happens. Make it more interesting or don't bother. It lacks focus, which makes me think you just pulled it out of your a$$ with no clear idea of what to do with it. So directionless, it's glaring.

go on that's good stuff

I think it its off too a good start and has Spikes tone down well. Cant wait for the next chapter:-)