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Raven Black
2006-05-06 . chapter 4
I enjoyed the story. very compelling and you have me hanging on the last chapter. Hope to read more
Aacire
2006-01-29 . chapter 4
I love this story and will be upset if you don't update it! I like the way you write! Update soon, Asta!
Kiharu Aroukii
2005-08-11 . chapter 4
Love the fic. Just a question: When my mom was reading this over my shoulders (XD She scared the hell outta me), she commented that JJ might have another reason for protecting Ryo. Any way, hope you update soon!
Duette
2004-08-03 . chapter 4
Yay!! Dee and Ryo got together after all! I can't wait for the next installment, keep it up!
Hatori Soma
2004-05-03 . chapter 4
KEEP GOING!!
Devil666sc
2004-04-27 . chapter 4
Aw it was so cute. Dee cried... i cried to... wah so sweet. (Just kidding i didn't cry but very moved.) i love it. post soon. i can't wait that long
neuroticsquirrel
2004-04-26 . chapter 4
No! Don't kill anyone. Please update quickly!
XZanayu
2004-04-25 . chapter 4
How kawaii!! I'm so happy for Dee and Ryo! Hurry with the next chapter!
Hatori Soma
2004-04-23 . chapter 3
This is so cute! Keep going!
NeuroticSquirrel
2004-04-22 . chapter 3
I don't care about the stupid weird marks! Update quickly! This story is the best FAKE story on ff.net. Hurry!
Devil666sc
2004-04-22 . chapter 3
I really like it. Poost really soon. i love how you have Ryo thinking about Berk. most ppl show him as a jerk, even though he is, but i really like it. post soon.
XZanayu
2004-04-21 . chapter 3
Looks like Ryo might be connecting with Rose than with Dee. Dee will be so hurt when he finds out. Awaiting the next chapter!
NeuroticSquirrel
2004-02-10 . chapter 2
Yay! You're back! I missed you. I love this chapter. Keep going!
dfgtrty56ybs
2004-02-04 . chapter 1
yes kep going please!
magget
2004-01-02 . chapter 1
very nice start...update soon!
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