hm perfect pair... this might turn out quite well. well hope you update.

OMG~ that was confusing! you must UPDATE!
clear up my questions and confusion~ D:
please update. it's God.

Why didn't Tezuka and the other try to contact Fuji's house? Surely eventhough Tezuka still couldn't open up his heart, the others would try to ask Fuji's reason to leave? Beside it seems that Tezuka feels the same too. He was suffered because of Fuji's departure.

mah, this one is strange, but great and thrilling.
I want to know what happens next, be sure that I'll wait tensed for the next chapters. (ans sorry for my bad english if it is)

Interesting! I want to know what happens. A I love TezuFuji angst!! ^__^ Gambatte!

;_; That's sad. Very interesting story, but sad. I wonder what Fuji means 9_9. How mysterious. Please update soon and keep it up!

very nice:D

hi!
well, i gotta say your fic tickles my curiousity. as for the strange chapters order, i supposed it's like starwars movies, no? interesting.. if not rare. and i really look forward to your next chappies [are you into zuka/fuji smut btw? wondering why it's so hard to find in this fandom]. ganbatte ne!

kind of confusing...but intriguing...I want to know what's going on!!

This is great altogether confusing, at least the "I'm disappearing before your eyes" part... ^^ It truly is and I really want to know what actually is happening, so please continue.

This story really caught my attention. I'm very interested in what you are going to do with it. About the question with the names, I haven't gotten confused (yet) with them. I assume that by using first names that they will get very (very) close in the future. (?) Otherwise in Japan if they are just classmates they call each other by their last names. I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep writing!

Er...~_~ I don't quite understand this chapter. you really made me confused T_T 'cos the words're spining. Er...somehow, I like the "I'm disappearing before your eyes" part! It really touched me, made me remember my old friend who did disappear before my eyes. Is it their key-words? *blinking stupidly* hn...quite poetric.

Honestly, I did think you should use the family name for naration. for the conversation part, I think you can just follow the anime ^^ It's rather easy that way, besides it's familiar in the readers' eyes( Ano...since we're reading ^o^!) and maybe, just maybe, you can create some funny nickname yourself!Continue soon, okay?! I'll be waiting!

OMEGAH! HEHEHEH I KNOW TWO OF THE SONGS!! GRAVITY BY MAAYA SAKAMOTO AND COCKTAIL BY HYSTERIC BLUE!! XD XD gravtiy is wolf's rain's OP and cocktail is is is spiral~suiri no kizuna~ 's ending song right? I LOVE THEM SO GOOD SOO GOOD XD hehehehehe yay! so surprised hahah

I think you should use last names because it seems so strange to use the first names. The Tennis members would usually call everyone by their last name so I think last name would be best for narration. I wubbed this chapter! It was so descriptive and cool! Why did Fuji leave?

eh...the first chapter was confusing... you are going to contuine with this right? i hope so. it's really good. as for the names, i don't think it matter what you call then, since any PoT fan would know who you mean. anywho, post soon!