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b4k4 ch4n 2008-03-05 . chapter 1
Wow, just...wow. I think I cried while reading this. That was really sad.

You wrote this really well. The ending left a big impact on me too. I just kept hoping and wishing and saying "Oh, maybe by some unknown miracle, Issac will be able to confess to Mia with words." But I guess miracles only happen in fairy tales huh?

I love this. Good work! =D I guess I share Crystal and Mist's sorrow. [Joins in with the crying]
a fan 2008-02-22 . chapter 1
It would be very nice if a sequel could be written with both souls being reborn and this time they must find each other in their next life and marry and have children.

Or their souls, through some miracle, reunite and move on the to next stage of existance never to part from each other again.
Tim 2007-12-08 . chapter 1
Ah! How could you dare to write that Mia didn't find Isaac? Her poor, silent soulmate which needs her like the blood in his veins? This doesn't make Mudshippers happy. And I'm not happy now. So sad! T_T ... But, for what it is, a most excellent story!
Aquatic-Idealist 2007-08-26 . chapter 1
Depressing... Yet quite well written...
UndyingSpirit 2006-03-29 . chapter 1
Whoa! Major tear jerking here! You will pay for making me cry! ^_^; Just kidding

Good short story.
Gravaja Umbros 2006-02-10 . chapter 1
T_T

This story was so sad! Poor Isaac! Poor Mia! Really well written, but I just can't handle stories without a happy ending. Nothing against you, it's a great story. It's just TOO SAD! *cries*
Rensaur 2005-12-02 . chapter 1
It hurts. So much.

The last part just did it. It just caused my eyes to drown.
Lord Cynic 2005-09-01 . chapter 1
Holy... crap... I never knew a story like this existed. Damn... just... wow... maybe it wasn't a good idea to read this at nice... but... I guess it'll be easier to come to grips with since I deal with things better at this time. Damn, though... that was tragic but awesome. Magnificent...
J. Carax 2005-03-26 . chapter 1
And here I'm not acting like my djinni namesake. Right now, I'm crying like a baby. Mainly because I'm relating Isaac's pain to mine. And then when Mia couldn't find him, that did it. I've got the sprinklers on right now.

Well, brilliant. And I hope EoL gets updated soon, that cliffhanger is killing me.
Diana@hnd 2004-12-14 . chapter 1
This is so sad... this is a well written one...(sniff) Keep up the good work! (sniff)
Unknown-Character 2004-10-11 . chapter 1
T_T... So sad... Very sad... I'm speechless...
Stormhammer 2004-09-29 . chapter 1
I have never read any fic with such radiating emotion as this one. You are truly a master of your craft.
Saiyagal 2004-09-16 . chapter 1
;_; Oh, that was so sad!! *sniff* That was very good!! I love Mia and Isaac, don't you? And we need stories that don't have a happy ending sometimes.

Oh yeah! You said in your summery that this is what would have happened if Isaac hadn't gotten his voice back, right? Well, were you planning on writing about Mia and Isaac's get-together if he had? I hope you do! (Or have!)
Aesahaettr's Might 2004-09-11 . chapter 1
Chammuran Lailan: No words can express how much I loved this. I’m not kidding. I cried enough to drown a person to death.

Felix: Dang, you used me as a tissue! Next time don’t attempt to click on stories like this when you know your eyes are gonna pour! I’m not being your tissue next time!

Chammuran Lailan: Thank you, Felix for being my tissue boy.

Chammuran Lailan: Your story was wonderfully written. The feelings and emotions of Isaac were clearly portrayed; I even felt his plight! (Oh poor Isaac! Damn muteness!)
RedXIII-souless 2004-09-06 . chapter 1
yay!! it's really... sad... but it's really good! ^.^ i wonder what happens, though?
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