This is a really good fan fiction. I like it a lot because i can relate to it. It has good details and a good story line. I was able to picture the place and tone pretty well.

I think that the story was okay I really didn't get the feel of the story but thanx anyway!

is the school going to be a all black skool? please update soon.

This is OK. It don't think it should be rated G because of the swears. And what does sploggy mean? lol Keep going!

that was good

i think that u can write very well n u put in yr effort.

ok lah veri good but veri cruel

I liked the story.