   Shinigami Kiyomi 4/4/12 . chapter 1this was hilarious sigh i cant believe i missed my dinner trying to finish this -.-' too late to eat anything now... 10:57pm...
anyways that was great! - |
| devilburns 11/18/03 . chapter 1 cool story!
more like it soon. |
| monkeynoc 10/30/03 . chapter 1 aw that was great!i loved it. I coudnt stop laughing. Spelling was alright. you could have workedon your descriptions a bit more but otherwise your story was awsome! keep up the promising work!
from: the bringer of death named monkey |
| Bree In Diamonds 10/30/03 . chapter 1 haha lol oh wow that was great.
"Tro', it's a tie pin, it's not plotting against you, it's not leading a rebellion of male jewellery, it's just a tie pin." lol
that part was the best! keep up the good work! |
| BluePig 10/30/03 . chapter 1 Totally outta-control-wet-your-pants funny! |
| Jenihenpen 10/30/03 . chapter 1 *grins* Arrgh, matey! *giggles* Happy Halloween dude! This made me giggle, therefor, it is a great fic _ Keep up the good work! |
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