cool

good i like it and it shows a very likly mindset of sara in that scene.Though i felt the talk of her application was a way for her to push Gil into facing the fact that she likes him and trying to get some possible response. When she asked him on that date she points out that she can't wait for him forever i think in a way she was trying to remind him of that.

It's very beautiful. 'That scene' is going to remain in my head forever. You've captured it so well. I love Sara's thoughts.
I was on reading spree - just took a guess you'd be here :)

Thank you to everyone for reviewing, I really appreciate it! I keep trying to work on more G/S 'shippy stuff but most of it winds up as 100 word drabbles :( Still, so far S4 is providing inspiration! :)

(bugface, I'm in the UK too & I agree, it definately isn't fair we have to wait!) Thanks again everyone. xo.

Your fic is really good. Nice job!
I wonder if Grissom will ever stop being afraid?
Anyway, I saw you've got lots of fics... I'll have to read more of your stuff.. keep un the good work.

Take care

that was good story!
i never got to see that episode...
DAMN BASEBALL!

Oh ... this was wonderful. Your words truly capture Sara's emotional ride of excitement, confusion, and breathlessness in this scene. It was so nice to get inside her head here. Perfect characterization. Beautifully done.

Wow! What an angsty story. Please write some more, if not a sequel to this then just other stories about our favourite science geeks.

(Its so not fair, in the uk we dont get to watch season 4 until next year. Oh mercy on us brits!)