I LOVE this story! I really wish you would finish it. Your a great writer.

Well if thats not the worst day ever, then I would really like to know what is!

So sad, yet so good!

whoa, jerry is a sick bastard. and the confusion of who's the victim at the end was good and kept me on my toes.

Well.

aww i love it pmn

i just found this story and i would love it if you would update! this story is fabulous!

WOW!

That was intense! Keep up the good work! Poor Olivia! :(

I just found this story and finally finished it. I love it. I really hope you update, I'd love to find out how this story ends. Great job.

Please update your story! This is a great story- well written and entertaining, and I'd love to see how it ends.

Also, 40 is actually a lot closer to 9 months than 10 months, mathematically speaking (while we generally say there are 4 weeks in a months, there are actually closer to 4 and a third (4.348...) weeks in a month. This makes a big difference.) Multiplying 4.348 by 9 months gets you 39.132 weeks- multiplying by 10 months gets you 43.48.

Going by logic- adding up all the days from January to September (9 months)gets you 273 days (no leap year in February). Divide 273 by 7 days in a week gets you 39 weeks. There are 304 days from January to October (10 months), and dividing 304 by 7 days gets you 43.43 weeks.

So you see, 40 weeks is a lot closer to 9 months than 10 months. That's why it's generally said a pregnancy lasts nine months. No need to throw a fit- or at least do the math first.

That said, this is a wonderful story otherwise. Please finish it soon.

I was just wondering if you were going to update this story.

I really like your story! It's really good! I hope Olivia decides to come home soon. It doesn't seem like her to leave Elliot and the kids like that. But then, we've never actually had a canon episode where she was raped.

Update soon! I can't wait to read more!

is that the end or are you going to update

Wow... more please? I love the angst, and I ahve been waiting so long for an update on this story! Glad to see you're still working on it! Let's see the next chapter! Olivia's fears of harming her child in some way make a lot of sense considering her past, so I can definitely see why she left. This is very well done - I hope to see more soon!

BelovedOne

Whoa! Calm down, there. You can't flip out at us, especially if you're wrong. And you do realize, each month is more than 4 weeks? If you add up 10 months, (I'm going January to October) you get 304 days. When you divide that by 7 days (the days per week) you get 43.4285714. To make that simpler, 43.4 is the amount of weeks. Which is only a couple days off from 44 weeks. Which means, 40 weeks is MUCH closer to 9 months than 10 months. There, I explained it by using logic and math, which you cant dispute. So you can't really get pissed at them if they're right? Dontcha just love getting corrected by a 7th grader? Other than your hissy fit, you're an amazing writer, and I really enjoy the story. Keep it up! (well, not the tantrums. the writing.)

Wow! This was a great chapter! After I re-read the story and caught myself up and knew just what was going on in it that is! Yea for the update!