I like! Keep it coming!

Hey, nice to see that you are back at it! This is a really cool story and i love the bit of mystery you threw in at the end of this chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter - its nice to get a fresh M/L story!!

Fair Cate

ohh what does logan really want to do? Ohh virus cure? come on you gotta throw in a little m/l romance right? or alot you know what ever you want. (hint hint) ohh what are they going to dress as, suddenly so many visuals come to mind o Max as a fairy princess, wait no as a teenage mutant nija turtle, wait no maybe as wonder woman.. oh this is making me think. What will Logan go as too? he goes in drag AHAHAH ok my imagination is running wild here and i must cap it so write the next chapter so i can see.

Trice baby its been forever no? i've come to review for you. I like the way you start it. So sweet that he asked her to go trick or treating even though he thinks she's with Alec. Will all the transgenics trick or treat? i read on...

that was great!
but what acting performance, he has something up his sleeve. please update soon i wanna see what he's going to do.

What a relief to have a M/L story!! I/m thoroughly enjoying it! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Woo Hoo - a new little story from Trice. Happy Hallowen anyway even if it's not your thing.

I hope this gets you in the mood for working on "other stories." Hint. Hint.

Hm, interesting . . . I'm wondering just what Logan is up to here . . . sneaky sneaky. ;)

BTW, no trick-or-treaters at my house for the 4th year in a row. I wouldn't mind if you could send Logan in my direction, though . . . ;)

Hey,

Very interesting story. I can't wait to see where do you go from here.

i love it! max and logan in the best holiday ever! woo hoo! more please this is really great!

I'm enjoying this and intrigued to see what comes next.

Woohoo! It's good to see you back around here, Trice! Seems like so many of us are just vanishing. :(

This starts off pretty good, and I'll keeping an eye out to see what comes next.

"It was this invitation that finally convinced Max of the sad reality. The toxic
waste of Terminal City had started to affect Logan's sanity." lol. I can just see the look on Max's face as she's thinking this. :) That's great. :)

And don't worry about work. The weekend's almost here, right?

Never been trick or treating? Guess what - neither have I, and I'm not planning on starting either. Kids think I'm an awful mean mother, lol.

Nice work. I'm looking forward to the next instalments.