hotthing92 2006-10-15 . chapter 1I have Read your stories many times and this is one of my favs. |
MusicaGrant 2005-10-20 . chapter 8Please it has been so long, are you going to update? Please please please update! |
beckythorn13 2004-12-26 . chapter 4Brava! This is a review for the whole story. I love this story! You've done a marvelous job of keeping the wizarding world as it should be, and you did so well in keeping Rita Skeeter in character that by the end of the story I was ready to wring her neck.(I have a tendancy to get mad at people that aren't actually there.) One of the things I love about this story is that it shows so much effort. You've clearly spent a lot of time on it, which adds a lot. Good job!
Thorn |
lyn 2004-08-12 . chapter 1 are you going to finish Merry Christmas Sarah Williams? |
honoradele 2004-08-10 . chapter 2First, thank you for the explanation of where this story starts.
This is a good beginning. However I have a couple of nits to pick as well as a more serious problem. Ginny is a Weasley not a Wesley as you write at one point! (I hope I spelled the names right.) Also Ginny is a year behind Hermione and the others what is she doing here?
On a more serious note was Draco's spell just the explosion or was there more to it? Hopefully I'll figure it out in a later chapter.
Thank you for a good story. |
Desert-Rose6 2004-07-27 . chapter 9You are abso-bloody-lutely amazing! I can't believe how good this story is! |
Desert-Rose6 2004-07-26 . chapter 4When exactly did Severus propose? |
JustJeanette 2004-07-26 . chapter 9This is only a short review to say YAY another chapter. I'll get to the proper review when I have a chance to sit down and read it all through again.
Happy Day.
Jeanette |
Misss Elizabeth 2004-03-26 . chapter 7 Please write a new chapter. I have been waiting patiently, but i want to see what happens next.
I want to say that this story is one of the best.The only problem is that the marriges are to long.thanks for letting me read your stoy.
-Mis Elizabeth |
Ana Morales 2004-02-03 . chapter 7WHAT THE HE-DOUBLE HOCKEY STICKS?! Okay, the Severus/Hermione thing you pulled off well, but Remus/Sirius? EW! |
L. Reisert 2004-01-25 . chapter 7This story keeps on getting sweeter! Please update soon! |
deltaevenstar 2004-01-08 . chapter 7I like this story and it has so many twists and turns. |
Deb >^..^< . 2004-01-07 . chapter 7 WOW! So much happened in this chapter, good & not so good! I REALLY HATE Voldie & Lucius! They are really nothing more than pure evil!
The wedding was WONDERFUL & I am so very impressed by Natasha's powers even before birth!
What is going to happen to Hermione's parents?
Hoping for more soon, Deb >^..^ |
wild child 2004-01-03 . chapter 7 update soon plz im curius 2 what happens. will draco be saved and become good. u could make lupkin pregnant with black's baby {it is the wizerding world it could happen}. then little natasha would hav a little friend. |
Elven Warrior1 2004-01-02 . chapter 4I like this story..veyr long, and it's taking me a while to read it..but still very good |