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| Barza 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseI really like your story! I hope you'll find some time so that you could update/write more to this one. But really. This is a really good story. I'd like to hear more what Harry did abroad! :D I also like your story called 'That Which Cannot Be Seen' and hope you could continue that one, too. :) |
| Son of twilight 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuse*O* WOW! please continue your story i really really like it ^.^ |
| sashlea 2004-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved the ending. Makes you think of a hidden undercurrent sliding underneath the play at the water's top. |
| SimplyTurquoise 2003-11-25 ch 1, | abuseI haven't read many Harry Potter fanfics but this seems very much the unconventical pairing- it's too bad this is a one-shot (at least I think it is) but I look forward to any and other future Harry Potter fanfics you write. |
| Rayne-Jelly 2003-11-02 ch 1, | abuse... ::Sniffles:: I liked that very much. I didn't want it to end. ::Sniffles again:: I'm not saying their should be a sequel (oh please no, that might ruin it, and we should never suffer ruination) but... ::Sniffles and pouts:: It was really good. ~Jelly ::crys:: |
| darke wulf 2003-10-31 ch 1, | abuseBravo!! Your wording is eloquent without being overly embellished, your characterizations are superb, your dialogue though provoking; overall a truly excellent piece. I do hope we'll be seeing more of this in the near future. |
| mslfoysnogger 2003-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my goodness! What a story...that conversation was full of hidden meanings...you did a great job with it. This is a great chapter. I do hope you plan to continue this story soon! |
| Ami 2003-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh that was good! hehe, draco fantacizing about Harry...lol, u know what--harry needs to admit his feelings...Very well written! i loved it |
| annon. 2003-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's bloody fantastic! are you going to write a second part or is this a one hit wonder? anyways, i like. |
| psychonna 2003-10-31 ch 1, | abuseOh! Nice start! Can't wait for the next part! |
| the cultural dictionary of ... 2003-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abusenice fic cappie. very deep and dark and halloweenish. I love H/D and u pull it off so well considering u r the master @ IY fiction. Is this the begging of a new career for you?? Can I expect more? |