First thing, this was brilliant. We never get to see these guys having fun, and I'm sure glad we did.

Second, I've been scouring the internet for your masterpiece, Butterfly. It was the first piece of f/f I ever read. Then I worked out I was gay :P Yours still remains one of my favourites though, and now that the Construct's down, I can't find it anywhere. Is there somewhere on the net it still exists? Or could you send the document to me? My address is PLEASE drop me a line, I really miss this fic. It was kinda cool to read about Sorcha and Goose and Peg again, I almost missed them as characters. I also miss pre-Neo Trinity. So please get back to me.

Thanks heaps, Torak

Oh boy. Re-reading this fic takes me back. ;-)

Good stuff. I love sillyfic. I love old dance music. And I love that shirt. Fun combination.

-Ellie

Ah! DS, I LOVE this! Half my playlist there! *found herself singing along and finishing lyrics more than once while reading*
And I love the thing with Sorcha and Neo and Trin's shirt. Can't believe I didn't read this before! is it a fic within a fic, like, set somewhere within Butterfly?
Actually, thinking about it, it has to be, doesn't it?
Brilliant all the same. I love your writing, always have. :) And this:
He grabbed her wrist and drew her in close. "I mean," he murmured, "that I want us to go back to your room so that I can make love to you for the rest of the night."
sounds just like my boyfriend *huge smile* *gives you a hug* Amazing.

Oh sweet lord. That is hysterical. It's like a very surreal dream, where you blend two realities... and I think I must have od'd on the hardline through sheer excitement at having found it, because somehow the surreal part wasn't Zion.
So beautifully in character even when au to this extent!
Fantastic. And so nice to get happy Zion snippets, especially after Rev.s

God, this was better than I thought!! Keep writing!

That was so funny and fun and sexy and crazy and I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! *worships* And you made her wear the Dontian! THE DONTIAN! I don't believe it. (Trinity: "Believe it.") Ok. I do now. ^_^ Love the songs you chose, so great. You make these tiny connections to the movies that are subtle and nothing too obvious like "WEAR THE DONTIAN SHIRT WHEN ALL THE SHIPS ARE BACK IN ZION, RIGHT AROUND WHEN SMITH COMES BACK!", they fit perfectly. And I love Sorcha and Peg. I just love the to bits. And I love you! I want more of this kind of stuff!

-gypsy

Oh my. This was like 10 hundred times funnier and sexier than I ever hoped when you told me you were writing it. Damn woman. Rock ON!
(she kept her promise *squee*!)

~Zeph

Awesome story! I loved how you incorporated the music! Great job!

~DM

YES! This was great!! I loved it!! And what was even better is that I was listening to "It's Raining Men" (although it is the Geri Halliwell version) already and then I saw that song was playing in the fic! But it was great!! And just the fact about the dontian shirt just rocked!! This was a great funny fic and stuff! ^.^

This has done the nigh-impossible and actually made me laugh out loud with sheer happiness. Yey for Happy!MatrixCrew! Love your writing style - it's so vibrant and alive. It makes me want to kick off my shoes and join the party (because quite frankly, the track listing is fantabulous. Love all the songs, man. :) )

Also, it reminds how awesome Butterfly is and how badly I need to re-read it and write you a big fat gushy review.

I loves it. :)

Hey again!!

God I liked this story. So optimistic, so glad and so loveable. And to a must add, a bit horny as well. *laugh*

I liked the way you mixed music into it, I love when authors do that. More songsfics to the people!! D'you think you could do a kind of continuation to this story?? Using songs and everything?? That would be incredibly neat!!

Keep up the good work girl...:)

This was so great, I haven't even read Butterfly yet and I loved it. I thought everyone was perfectly in character, there needs to be more happy Zion fics, you did such a great job. It was such a fun thing to read, had me laughing and smiling. I loved some of the comments made by Trinity, Neo, Niobe, Ghost and Sparks. The line about "cocoa puffs" was awesome, I could picture all their faces lol. Write more, write more! It wasn't stupid it was FUN :) I'm definately reading Butterfly tomorrow. I have to read this again, it was just too good... *goes off to read*

Thanks for the ultimate pick-me-up. It was so perfect how you made the Violas a serious experience, not something to be taken lightly.
And your teasing!Trinity is the best I've ever read. If certain rumours come true I think I'll be cuddling this fic like a favourite blanky, remembering happier times.

Awesome. You really are goddess material.