I think this is an awesome story and I have spent the majority of the day reading it. I love your writing style and hopefully you will update soon.

This is such a powerfully written story. The way you string together your sentences sounds perfect, and your characterizations of Vincent and Yuffie and spot on awesome.

All of us. We all want more. I don't know where you are, or if you can even read this, but oh my God, you need to finish this. It's probably one of the best things I've ever read, and you left it on the world's biggest cliffhanger.

But I suppose all good things see their end, and maybe this was it.

Other than all that, I really do hope you finish this, someday.

"Fuck you, Vincent. You know what I say?"

For some reason, that is the favourite quote in this story. LOL

But I digress. OMG. Be still my beating heart. I am loving so much how you've characterised Yuffie in this story. I thought you wrote her growth and maturity with incredible ease and skill. She's still childish and playful in many ways, but when she becomes all business in the face of serious issues, like that quote above, GARH, I'm having chills.

Also, I am intrigued by your plot, and am curious to see how you will play out the relationship b/w Yuffie and Godo. I am a sucker for father/daughter plots, and I think there certainly is much to explore in that context.

Lastly, I am bedazzled by the mystery that is ever Vincent Valentine. I continue to ache and wonder what and how he thinks, and I am excited to see him unravel more around Yuffie.

Anyway, I await with eagerness if you ever do decide to continue this fic. Till then, happy writing. :)

My first review for this lovely story and it starts with error-noting...oh well. The line: "with the ubiquitous title, "The Greasy Monkey""...I was unaware there were lots of buildings called the Greasy Monkey in the world of FFVII- "ambiguous" perhaps? Otherwise, loving the intrigue over the Wutaian politics and of course, Vincent trying to deal with two chatty persons, albeit one being a demon- still chatty. Very neat how his past flash-back ties in with the person hunting him- question: is there a Germany in this world?

Oh, man, oh my god, I've found you y
Wow I read one of your histories in another page (I dont remember which one) and it made me write fanfics
Thank u n.n

This is very well written. And the title totally seal the deal. Um, "A Love Story For Manic Depressives"? Hilarious. But as for the fact that you haven't updated since '06, and this is March '09...Seriously, shit or get off the pot. Toilet. Whatever. As it were.

Well, I don't normally read FF VII fics, but this one seriously grabbed my attention. I think you did a bang up job on capturing both vincent and yuffies characters. Also if you havn't played Dirge of Cerberus yet, it was a good game. But I don't think it managed to capture the awesomeness that is Vincent. I would give it a 7/10. It looks like you have discontinued based on the fact you haven't updated since 2006, I hope you are just taking a break. This story is really awesome. I think you have potential for writing actual novels myself. Hope you decide to continue.

:sighs happily: ive been waiting for these past two chapters for a while, and i just happened to stumble upon the story again, and saw it had more. and they were fantastic!! hope to see more soon!XD

i hate yuffietine becoz i think it'll never happen in a million years so i just checkd out this fic for laughs and i lUVD IT! i think your portrayal of yuffie's perfect but i'm not so sure about your vincent though but i luv the plot and the writing style and the pacing =3 overall, this is awesome

so update already, dude, it's gonna be two years soon since last updated, you should be itching to right by now

God, I LOVE this story! I ADORE this story!

I can't wait for the next update! It's been a while, hasn't it?

But awesome can't be rushed! I hope you update soon though, it's almost two years! xD

I hope that, whatever you're doing, you enjoy it, or at least that it doesn't hurt much!


By the way, all the things you portrayed are extremely vivid to me. The townspeople battle scene was the one that hit me the most. I can't say it's my favorite, seeing that means I have to like it in a sense that I enjoy it, but I really do like that scene. Just the emotion put into it, and the horror that the girl had to go through. I hope to see the girl again, because I don't feel her story has ended. Although it is extremely sad that the scene ended up with only the girl and the younger lords surviving. I'm sad that he took her away. Makes me wonder who the townspeople who were still surviving and fighting followed, or what they did when they noticed she was no longer there. Or where they already dead from falling back? It's a bit foggy to me.

Anywho, I do believe that your assumption on Chocobos is correct, however in recent games horses have not made appearances, so I assume they must of died out at some time or the other... Or maybe the canon game is only chocobos. I like to believe that horses do exist though. 83

My other favorite scene includes the... Hurr... I dunno, I like this whole story, but I believe that I really liked the scene where Yuffie and Vincent are walking in the forest. I was inspired to draw something of that, actually. It is on my Deviant Art if you ever feel the need to look.

Anywho, I really do love this story! Although there are a few handfulls of mistakes here and there, it doesn't ruin the overall presentation of the story, but it does disrupt it. xO

I can't wait for the next update! Keep on rockin' and rollin'!

Much love!

Adios!

Hi hi, I know you haven't updated this in ages. I just happened to have stumbled on it again after not having read it for maybe two years now. I just wanted to thank you again for writing such a wonderful Yuffentine. I enjoyed re-reading it as much if not more than when I'd first did - I absolutely adore your amazing descriptions, dialogues, interaction and development of the relationship between Vincent and Yuffie. I believe its writers like yourself that keeps a fan's longterm liking for a pair so alive over the years. Thanks again and take care!

*sigh* It makes me so sad to have to stop reading an amazing story that isn't yet finsished. Especially one that hasn't been updated in years, because I figure it never will be. It leaves me with a feeling of uncompletion, sure I can find another story, but I can't stop thinking of the much better story I found before...
What I'm trying to get to is that there are people out there who have waited MUCH longer than me, years probably. And if I am left with an insane NEED for you to update immeadiatley lest I die, I can't even imagine what they feel by this time.

In other word's...please update soon!
PS...One of the greatest Yuffentine stories I've ever read, very nice.

Aww so cute. I love Vinny trying to comfort her "It's...alright?", haha the poor confused boy, so cute, so very in character.

Nothing can express the sorrow I feel when I noticed the last time this story was updated. I'm hoping, beyond hope, that there is at least a chance that you would possibly update in the future because I am in love with this story. I adore you for this. This writing is wonderful, in character, and a joy to read. To see it sitting alone like this for so long is truly sad. Please? Would you please update sometime in the future?

^_^ Hoping for a new chappie soon!! Thanks!!

This is the best %&$%% fanfic I've ever read with Vincent Valentine portrayed *exactly* as I imagined him and in perfect character!(and I do agree with your decision to make him cold and calculating, many writers kill their Vincents by not realising that it *is* what he is)
I'm amazed at how well you can keep his mental workings so well throughout your work, and even the slight misshaps work because you let them slip at the right moments.

The only critic I have are the long philosophical introspections some of your own custom characters have. Although, I must admit they are fleshed out better than a whole lot of other custome made-up characters I've read because of these, it gets a little long and dreary and I think most readers get it after the first few analogies or ideas presented to further their story and development.

Also I love your small author narrations, they almost seem like Yuffie's thoughts in some cases and, while reading your fanfic I notived that they are done mostly in 'lighter' more humorous parts of the story and you never break any tentions.

All-in-all the best fanfic I've had a chance to read with Vincent as main character..EVER. Litterally glued to the screen for a few hour. I love how his character is developing while still remaining characteristically 'Vincent'. Can't wait how both their relationships will change them.

*LIFTS HER GLASS TO YOU*