This is one of the best pre-movie fics I've seen. Brilliant

Beautifully written. Very descriptive and plausible.

wow...that was really good!

Brilliant fic. :) It actually fits with what I'm currently writing, which is a Trinity/Thomas Anderson. :) Not as crazy as Trinity/Persephone, but still... lol... it's fun to be bi. You have the viewpoint.

Hola! I have to say, of all of the Trinity POV's that I've read, your's is the best. It's highly believeable, and not only that, but the story flows very well. I believe you can build on this. It's great as a stand alone, and I'm sure you could add more to it... easily. It's also be great as a continuation. Just a few spelling errors but overall a very moving and believeable piece. I'm writing one like it, myself. It will most likely NOT be as well-written as yours. Rock on!
~Woot! -Leslie

I really like this fic, hope you carry on!*coughs*

i thought this was very good! i like the way you articulate trinity's thoughts and inner conflicts. i hope you continue this!

Wow. This is a gret fic. I'd love to see another chapter...*hint*

I hope you keep this going. :)

Fantastic! The Trinity characterization is perfectly true to the story. I really hope you continue this, I would love to read more.

~Mako

That was amazing, so sweet!

I hope you'll continue writing this story.

This is excellent! I really love your characterizations. Your neo is very very NEO and he hasn't said a word. I also am really liking your Trinity. I'd love it if you followed this up. If she's so addicted to him, why doesn't she say anything until he's dead? how about during reloaded?
great work!
~Ry

wow- this is a really gr8 story!!it's really poetic :-)
are you gonna do more?

Superb. Your Trinity is just right. And I loved Neo feeding the cats - v. cute.

Hope you get over your writer's block!

Man, I loved this. It was excellent.

I hope you do more of these, or just continue this.

Meanwhile, write more, and great work! ^_^