Cute story! Good job with their characters! That is so them! I guess you wrote this before seeing Episode 162. Good ideas!

The GP is my favorite pairing, and I've read a lot of "hot they met" stories. I have to say that I really like your scenario. You made them into real people with faults and personalities. The way you ended the story was masterfully done. I didn't feel like there was anything left hanging. The last line itself makes me smile. Please keep up the good work.

That was great! Really awesome...

Nya! That was so good! I liked it a lot! ^^Hoi hoi!!

Wow. Interesting story. I love how you described the story. Very nice. Some errors here and there, but nothing too big to notice. ^-^ Somehow I love it how people describe how those two actually meet. ^_^ So cute. lol. I really pity Eiji's condition. *whispers* He's kind of mean to Oishi. -_-;
*shrugs* But one just can't help it when the captain wants some teamwork... err... maybe that came out wrong XD. How about partner work?
And Fuji's nice enough to try helping them out. ^_^ lol. I love the Fuji-Yuuta scene. lol. How confusing for poor Oishi. lol. ^_^
Wonderful work! Though... what does the last line mean? Did he mean Oishi changing his mind or Oishi changing Eiji's mind or even Eiji changing his mind? O.o

Love, love, LOVE how you established the Golden Pair relationship here. I simply adore it. Especially the way OOishi and Eiji didn't get along at first. And I just love your Eiji over all. Keep up the amazing work.

Aww :) That's so sweet. Wow, you really have a way of grasping the core of characters in your fics, and this one was great! Now be a good lass and add a bit more to your Naruto fic *winks* Greato! Burning!

That was *so* cute!

Heheh, the Golden Pair shall prevail! This is so great. Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97

wow, a very nice story! please write another story about them soon! :)

never really thought about how they got together before this.. great story! ^__^ i especially like the last part, oishi understanding eiji's weakness. glad you didn't just leave it hanging there after mentioning it in the beginning. it was a nice way to conclude the story. :)

annie

very introspective. a nice, different view on the Golden Pair's relationship, yet it works out perfectly in the end! very nice fic.

This story is so wonderfully sweet. I rarely ever see the Golden Pair not getting along, but you pull it off so well. It works - their personalities are so different that it seems unlikely that they just 'click'-ed (in real life, that is... it's a different story in sparkly "Golden-Pair-belongs-together" land). I like how you described Eiji's weakness, how the Golden Pair's styles are so complementary to each other. *sparkles*

I really your putting the story in Oishi's POV, although now I'm curious as to why Eiji didn't like Oishi at first.

I like the story a lot. It is rare story to show about Oishi's POV on how the Golden Pair came to be.

I think it is a very touching story and expands moreon Oichi's and Eiji's relationship which is not show in the amine.

I really liked this piece. It was very thoughtful and so KAWAI! I really enjoyed the end part when Oishi thinks about what might happen in the future. *^-^*