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| hgdmforever 2005-07-14 ch 11,  | abuseNo matter what other reviews say I think this story is great. |
| Midoriikawa 2005-03-27 ch 11, | abuseThis was so cheesy. It was cheesier than Cheesasaurus Rex, and thats cheesy. At least Jay was in character. If he was some backstreet boy I would have died. Sean was too soft. What the hell were you thinking when you made him such a sissy. Your story was like a bologna sandwich without the bologna, it didn't make sense. PS- I beg of you! Never write again! Miki and Arika(Satoshi) |
| Belle 2004-02-28 ch 11, anon. | abuseits really good but PLZ dont make this into a emma/cris and sean/alex thingy.i really like this fic so plz dont break sean/emma up.PLZ. |
| Amerie1 2003-12-27 ch 6, | abuseLike everyone said its a bit fake and OOC also you used exact dialouge from show and there are no details.This story could be good maybe if you changed your writing format.An why make Emma take E ... 1 she would NEVER do that 2 ... Ashley already did.The story is a bit plastic right now |
| pam 2003-12-02 ch 11, anon. | abusei thought it was cute! |
| chocochocobunny1 2003-12-01 ch 11, | abusehey! it was me, writing the bad revies. (ashley) Im not anonymous,k and you should be cracking up! And maybe, im not tough, but I wouldn't mind if people like (YOU) would stop writing such fake fics! |
| ashley 2003-11-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseFAKE! GAAH! This is so fake, I wanna slap you badly, very badly! Nahvamuffin! That doesn't just happen! besides, Sean has a GIRLFRIEND! AND IT'S NOT FRICKENEN EMMA! IT'S ALEX! And, Emma likes someone else, even though she still like Sean a bit. ever hear of CHRIS?!?! |
| ashley 2003-11-29 ch 7, anon. | abuseIU just got finished reading half of your story, and offence everywhere on it, it sucks... It's so fake! "Oh, emma, you are forgiven for taking drugs!" "Oh, mommy, I love you and I'm sorry! I will never do it again!" Hate it a emotion it feels like, thatg you'v never felt before... or your just the worst writer in the world. If you hate someone, you hate them! You don't just forgive and forget in 5 simple minutes, or less. You keep in on hating, so take my advice, and get tips from other Emma-trying-to-prove-herself-to-other fics... that would be all. bye |
| sayinjinj7 2003-11-17 ch 9, | abuseAlright. They got back together. Keep going. |
| Miss Devilish Angel 2003-11-16 ch 9, | abuseey, plz continue story realli good plot |
| Bloodred Cresent Mon 2003-11-14 ch 9, anon. | abuseYAY! Sean and Emma are back together! Update soon. You should have Ashley kick Jimmy's arse for that cmment he made in the last chapter. |
| degrassicutie1 2003-11-14 ch 1, | abuseyeah, i guess marie isn't really mexican. but emma still made a big mistake so i think it fits fine! |
| Cloudless13 2003-11-09 ch 7, | abuseOkay, first off, a lot of your characters are out of character. Secondly, I was hoping for this chapter to be better than the rest, but I was severely dissapointed when you used the exact same dialog as in the show. These are two TOTALLy diferent topics and should treated as such. -nikki g. |
| Bfftotally 2003-11-06 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey! Your story is really good! Keep typing i dont want it to end! I wanna see emma and sean back together now! |
| mo 2003-11-04 ch 6, anon. | abusehey this is a cool story i like it, i like it a lot. but i think you should have emma and sean get back to gether because their my favorite couple. i hope you write more soon. -rikku sann |