I definitely love this. Poor Goten!

::hugs goten::
now that i think about it... Goten would be full of sorrows in reality, wouldnt it? A childhood without a father, then poof! he's back. Damn...
the poem was awesome. well written, and it fit with a child'd POV.

_ This was wonderful, i just love your writings they are all great.

Another poem, perfect for the holidays.

Hey! really cute! i really like that. thats a cute DBZ Halloween poem.

LOVE IT!