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| Call-me-Zippy 2004-04-19 ch 2,  | abuseHow could you leave the story there??!? I need to know whats going to happen! Please post the second part soon! please! I love your humor! |
| NABELLETHEY 2003-12-26 ch 2, | abusesoo...explain to me how do sliding doors slam?!? forget it very funny...tuvok trying not to panic...have we ever seen him late for his shift? i think NOT but hey! still good x the Beffster |
| Skeleton L. Crow 2003-11-24 ch 2, | abuse*sighs* you fiddled with the enchanted dimensions, didn't you? well, it looks like you got one of the more normal ones. Watch out, your sanity make be at sake. Trust me, I know. I've had three encounters and well... I don't get a good nights sleep... *shudder* watch your grammer. and spelling. and capitalization... |
| starryeidangel 2003-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think your story was funny, even if it wasn't quite correct in everything, that doesn't really matter. I want to read the rest! Keep writing! |
| Call-me-Zippy 2003-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story and think it's really funny. Your lack of knowlage(sp?) is amazing and one of the most amuzing things about this story. I like the sliding door bit! Don't worry about sfcmdhq, seriously known for making bad reviews. I haven't seen one where s/he has made a good one, but oh well. I really liked this and i know humor is one of the worst to write. Keep it up, I really want to know where Tom goes to hide! |
| zeusfluff 2003-11-03 ch 1, | abuseHey, you know people can be so cruel. I know that because people have said things like that to me and I absolutely do not like it whatsoever. Don't be discouraged by what they said! I thought your story was great! I do hope you post a new chapter soon, coz this story is really and absolutely great! Don't give up hope! Your encouragement,~ZeusFluff~ |
| Earthling 2003-11-03 ch 1, | abuseshort. Interesting, but doesn't seem to have much of a point..yet. I'm sure that it'll become clearer with further chapters... |
| Donna2 2003-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm sorry, but this was totally confusing. First off you need to do more research and pay more attention to your grammer and spelling. Keep trying you can still get it right with some work. |
| sfcmdhq 2003-11-01 ch 1, | abuseFirst off... Paris doesn't work the 'comm' station, he works the 'con'.. as in 'helm'. Time in starfleet is noted in 24hr periods. You never say 8:31am.. you say 08:31 and everyone *knows* that you mean it's in the a.m. "when she got up him".. what language is that written in, certainly not english? And his uniform isn't ironed? I never ever saw anyone *iron* in any trek series! "call it a sicky".. again.. what language are you writing in? This entire story is not humourous, it's juvenile writing. Ah I think you better go back and watch Voyager..they don't *have* 25 decks! Grade: F minus |