so, the hospital part was because of the powder right? the end is really confusing

That was a really interesting idea! I like the ending.

THIS IS AWESOME! I love how Aya chose Weiss instead of reality. Wo-hoo! BTW: This rocks!

Good fiction! Seriously, it is.
I liked a lot of it, though you could have written some things a bit better. =X
Only one thing bothered me and that was the ending. I like how he chose Weib, but... It would have been so cool if Ran realized that it was the doctor, not Weib, that was fake.
^_^ It's good anyway.

Excellent ending, though I admit it felt a little abrupt as I read it. I especially liked the mirroring of the universes - "I want to be alive again", spoken to both Manx and Ken, in the separate universes.
Your stories are very creative, and I always enjoy reading them. I'll be looking forward to your next fic. ^_^

Nice ending.
>Ranechi

It was descrpitive at the end, and I like it enought that I can ignore the grammar mistakes that you made. You chose a good song to go with this last chapter. It was confusing at first, but when I finally caught on to it all, it made sense. I like the idea that you used for this story.

*sags with relief* I'm so glad Aya didn't go through with his plan as Abyssinian. Even if Weiss wasn't 'real' in this fic (not that they're real outside of it, but you hopefully know what I mean ^^;), I'd still have hated to see them get killed. Guess I'm sillily sentimental like that. The ending ... fits perfectly. Part of me objects I should be sad Aya/Ran isn't going to wake up, but ... it fits. I can't imagine another ending anymore, or wish for one. A wonderfully, grand engaging tale. ^_^

**claps** Good ending. It's kind of sad that Aya decided to live inside his illusion instead of facing reality, but like Manx said, she didn't care which world he lived in, as long as he did live. Also, the song had a very nice effect on the ending.

YAY! Way to go! I'm glad Aya choose Weiß, although I knew he would :) This was a fun spin on that Buffy episode (and who doesn't like Weiß more than Buffy!?)

I can't wait for your next Weiß fic, 'cause you WILL write more, right!?

Must read more! Can't live without more. I still can't figure out which one you mean to be real. Whatever. Please update soon!

Okay, im intrigued.

but still i like the idea and stuff the chapters are still rather small.

apart from that its good so far!

>Ranechi

continue please... i want to know how it ends and how ran will be cure...its to good... >.

Hm, the situation seems to begin to escalate, headed for a confrontation. Both intrigueing and interesting to read ; I like how the two worlds are set next to eachother. The ice-cream scene was interesting, very cute up until Dr Evan interfered. :)

i love it, update soon.