The formatting kind of threw me off at first, but I really liked your story.

Now that is good fanfiction. It was...yummy. And as stupid as I feel saying that, there is no other word to describe it. Excellent!

:O tom killed her?! omg! thats totslly evil!

Wow, perfectly Eerie, I like. At first I suspected someone was going to die when she vomited, (I thought maybe the wine was posion) butI never expected Myrtle to be the victim. Very Creepy, reminds me of the book "Jade Green" a bit.

Bravo.

Wow!! This was really good, i didn't know where it was going until the very end!! Great stuff! ^_^

~JessieRose~

*cries out in amazement!* I guessed it would be Voldie-wort but I didn't know it was Mrytle. And she pretended that Olive Warnby or whatever her name is was teasing her! O I like this version! *cackles*
Luv Cat

I am complete astonished at how well this reads. I loved it. It's short, but very powerful. I love how she swears revenge. But Myrtle never got revenge on Riddle, and she said she didn't know who controled the basilisk either. But the story was wonderful, even though it didn't fit the plot. Two thumbs way up, from...
Miss Ky

I never pictured Myrtle like that before. No wonder she still haunts the bathroom!

so that's why Myrtle's so depressing in Canon, great story, well done characters, great atmosphere, really places the reader in the fic

That was totally creepy! Loved it! It reinforces my opinion that Myrtle is a nut...poor thing.
SassyBird

wow. utterly amazing. i kept thinking harry/ginny? no, ron/hermione? no, hermione/snape? then the ending... WOW. I never thoguht about Myrtle and Tom!

Ohh, that was amazing. *shivers* Very eerie and elegantly told, and you kept me guessing until the end, when everything got tied together perfectly. About halfway through I was suspecting it might be Tom.

Very, very good. Rich and Gothic-seeming and all-around stunning. :-)

~Star

Oh my God! That was so good! I had absolutely no idea what was going on until the very end but I LOVED it! Keep on writing stories, please!

Real cool :)

Whoa, this story is unbeliveably good.