This is going really well. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update.

So much angst! I love angst.

Seifer and Ellone? Now that is one pairing that you don't see everyday. In fact, I think that you are the only one who even considered that possibility.

Please update soon.

Your characterization of Fujin is the best part of this entire thing. :-D

well done! I'm lovin this story, please continue soon.

Oh my God. *weeps* Squall! No, please don't die!

Keep on writing, and I will keep on reading! As heartbreaking as this story is, it is still good, so keep it coming!

I need a tissue.

this is really good. U must update vveeryy soon! I wanna kno whats wrong with Squall

This is getting really good! I hope that's Squall's gonna be alright :'(. I really like Irvine :p, but it kinda gets annoying how he always says my dearest, no offense or anything, if you like that, I'm fine with it, I'm just saying. Please continue this story soon, I want to see if Squall will be alright, and what's going on between Zell and Quitis ;p.

aww how sad.

i cant wait to find out what it is. please writw more soon.

I love this fic. Can't wait to see what happens ^_^ Your writing is great, and you keep the general ideas of the charaters with those of the video game! I give you two thumbs up!